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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Cool concept, great execution, wonderful story. I really hope you continue it sometime!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [28 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from BrownFinderth
Review:
I've very much enjoyed this story by Joyful!! The plot line is terrific in that it's a group of slayers in Middle Earth, not just one or two! And the songs are quite the thing! I do wonder if the author would be able to come back and continue to write this story?!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [6 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Vickzie
Review:
Loving the story! Please update some more soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [17 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from fran
Review:
I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
Review By [fran] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from celticjenn
Review:
Excellent story so far! Looking forward to reading your next chapter!!
Review By [celticjenn] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AriaDeloncray
Review:
Interesting idea! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [AriaDeloncray] • Date [10 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Good so far. Keep up the good work.



Typos I've spotted. Typos in brackets.

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“I was led to believe your warriors didn't trust males,” Haldir said. “Are you sure you want [out] assistance?”


our

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“She has much anger in her,” Legolas said, pointing to Shannon, who was working [to] one of the Galadhrim. “We would call it battle anger. The true seething rage that fills your heart and pushes you to bring the enemy to its knees. But I've never seen it in one of the race of men before.”


with

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“It is tradition for the women of the court to ride to the encampment to [] farewell [] the men. So, he will not stop me from riding out, if Rohan goes to war.”


bid
to

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“Joanie, [as] the guard to show you to the stables so you can water Shadowfax,” Gandalf instructed, making it clear to the guards that Joanie was his servant boy.


ask

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So there were stables in the higher levels of the city. And if the horses were [stables] in one of the lower stables, a servant would, of course, bring the horses up to the top of the city.


stabled

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Comments from author:
Thanks. I Usually post things unbetaed, and catch the typos when I reread, which I do repeatedly, 'cause I have a sucky memory. But, thanks! Glad you liked it.

Edit: Actually in the film Eowyn says "Farewell the men." Farewell can be used as a verb, especially in more archaic forms of English.

And in the second one, it's not supposed to be with, there's supposed to be another word in there, "To disarm one of the men" The word disarm was left out, lol.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [5 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Nosi
Review:
An enjoyable chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what changes can be wrought by the slayers and elves joining in the future battles.
Review By [Nosi] • Date [3 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from purrfus
Review:
I don't usually go for LotR crosses, but something made me stop and read this one. I'm a bit hesitant about the spell following them, but overall I think the story is working and I'm looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. Willow's spell had some big consequences. Things can never go back they way they were. *mwa ha ha!*

J/K, the laughter shouldn't be quite so evil. ;-)


I do have some interesting plans, so I hope my muses don't abandon me completely. I don't know when the next chapter will be posted, but I hope you'll stick with me. :D
Review By [purrfus] • Date [3 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from ALM
Review:
I'm glad you updated this story and I like it very much. Please add more soon!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it! This muse doesn't like me as much as the others, so it may be a while before another update, but I'll try!
Review By [ALM] • Date [3 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it!
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [3 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AntiCreator
Review:
I think destroying the palantir was possibly a bad move. It was important that Aragorn use it. Not only to draw Sauron's forces out of Mordor, but to keep his eye fixed away from his peril (Frodo and Sam) and how else will Aragorn learn of the fleet of Haradrim ships heading down the Anduin? If it wasn't for the ride of the Dunedain, those ships would have reached Minas Tirith before the arrival of the Rohirrim.

Then again, I suppose this is the movie-verse. Other than that, a good idea, and a good story so far.
Comments from author:
There is another Palantir. Denethor has it. The palantir Aragorn uses is Denethor's palantir.
Review By [AntiCreator] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from POTENTIALlyAwesome
Review:
Oooooooooooo! Please please please tell me we'll see some Buffy/Lego time??? Or Faith & Haldir?
Comments from author:
Did you read the notes where I said Buffy/Legolas friendship only? THis is not going to be a Buffy/Legolas romance. However, it will be Faith/Haldir. And there are some other pairings that will show up eventually. But Buffy's heart belongs to another...who might not be truly dead. ;-)

I'm really glad you like this!
Review By [POTENTIALlyAwesome] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
I *really* like this premise of the Slayers going into the First's home dimension. Very cool. I hope that you add on to it. Having the women of LOTR become Slayers is something new and different- also very cool. I love Eowyn and her defeat of the Witch King so having her be a slayer makes sense.

Oh, and Faith should *totally* hook up with Haldir haha!
Comments from author:
Faith/Haldir is a pairing I'm planning, and ChristyTrekkie made me some cool F/H pics in her Fanart story.

I've got the next chapter in a notebook, so it's just a matter of transferring it to the computer and making some changes. I think I'm going to get started on that now!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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