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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Rune
Review:
Completed stories can get 10's, but this one jumped to the end too soon. I'm guessing you're not that good or comfortable with writing mystic fights. How OldFart died is only one thing you left out. Willow at Hogwarts was skipped over too, that you could have written. Everything that happened before the battle with MoldyWart. Please write some of the story that you have left out.

PS reviewers and betas can help write a scene even if some, like myself, fail at writing complete stories.
Review By [Rune] • Date [19 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from seri
Review:
totally loved this, I do wish that the last chapter was longer though.
Review By [seri] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Christy
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I would have liked it better if you hadn't done that flying leap, time-wise in chapter three. That really upsets the continuity of the story and makes it a bit of a headache to follow from that point on. And, though I can't really put my finger on WHY exactly, it just seems like Severus and Willow were slightly OOC...can't pin why, but I stand by my feelings on a story. Nice idea, tho.
Review By [Christy] • Date [8 Jul 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from purrfus
Review:
The first three chapters are beautifully done. Interesting ideas and execution.

The last was short and worked as an epilogue, but the fact you felt it necessary to explain the end of the Big Bad in the authors note is somewhat awkward.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Good.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [19 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of story "Connecting with old friends" from Anonymous Reviewer
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This is good. I was a bit confused by the last chapter, but it's a good read. Smiles, Emmy
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [18 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Connecting with old friends" from Anonymous Reviewer
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awesome....I loved it....please write more stories staring Severus and Willow....please. :)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [17 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Connecting with old friends" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
A delightful story! Battle Mages indeed! I wish you would write some sequels to this story, perhaps some stand-alone adventures. Perhaps Willow and Severus could take an advanced class on a field trip or two! Great fun!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [17 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Connecting with old friends" from Anonymous Reviewer
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i really luved this fic, it was very very good, kinda wish it was longer{hopeful wishing} but i still luved it! maybe a sequal?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [17 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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