Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from alynambered
Review:
This was a very enjoyable story. I haven't watched NCIS, but this tempts me to. The kinky hints are a tantalizing tease, leaving one wanting a more developed description. :)
Review By [alynambered] • Date [19 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I really enjoyed this story. Some parts might not have been "my cup of tea", but I really did enjoy this story. Giles with Abby not my first or even my second thought on a pairing.
Oh, and by the way you caused my to spew my orange soda with this line:
"You're regretting every pepperoni pizza you ever ate?" Abby winced. "Think about me. The next time I go for confession, I'll have to be hypnotized so I can remember every sin I never copped to. The fathers are gonna need shifts."
I almost choked I was laughing so hard. :-0
Comments from author:
Telling, that I actually intended this line for Faith once upon a time.
Glad you liked!
Review By [Aynot] • Date [14 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from KzintiKiller
Review:
Normally I'd take one look at Abby and Giles and go "Eeeewww!", but this was cute, funny, sweet, and full of surprises from start to finish. Watching Abby lay Giles low (pardon the pun) was hilarious. Very well done.
KK
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from lamusicalady
Review:
awesome. awesome. awesome.
YES! :D
perhaps the best characterization of Abby i've read on this site. not a lot of people can manage her reaction to finding the darker side of life without giving her this totally blase outlook that's unrealistic to my eyes, but i freaking love what you did here. 1000 awesome points for existing and winning at life!
Comments from author:
Which is rather surprising, given that I've seen a grand total of seven or so NCIS eps. I must point out that considerable off-page beta'ing and advice was provided by tigerlily. Her fics are heartily recommended. In fact, they started me writing my own crosses in the NCIS fandom.
Review By [lamusicalady] • Date [7 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from MarbleGlove
Review:
This was a very, very good story. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Was that bit about an intern a hint that there might be a sequel in the works?
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [7 Nov 09] • Not Rated