I really love how you have done the first three chapters. A lot of good plot, that was nicely balanced. With some good feeders into the following chapters. This is really a very fun read. I hope that you keep going with it. Its really a wonderful read.
oh yeah, let her scare Vernon and give Harry to Giles. Or better let Petunia see the light and leave Vernon when he tries to hit her maybe. And let the council not be the same as they are in the series. And did I read it right Buffy is also an witch, who is her father.
please update sooner than later.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Jun 11] • Not Rated
I hope she will be or become a slayer/witch and that she will train Harry how to defend himself without his staff. Oh and please let her scare Vernon. pleaaaaaaaaaaaase.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [29 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from ClumsyElf
Review:
Great story!! Hope to see more soon!!
SARAH
Review By [ClumsyElf] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from Fantasymania
Review:
Nice!
Review By [Fantasymania] • Date [13 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from CousinMary
Review:
Ooo, I'm really intrigued by the idea of Petunia being Buffy's mom. I also like her standing up to Vernon and I'm giddy with how Buffy will react to Dudley (I'm hoping she'll be a good influence on him rather than dismiss him out of hand.) Anyway, great start :)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [13 Mar 11] • Not Rated