Slightly morbid and creepifying but good. I think she'd just LOVE it when she came across Elves. Possibly Elladan and Elrohir. Unless you dropped her in back in the First or Second age.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [2 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Like a dark piece and this fulfilled my love. Buffy is a hunter, Slayers were meant to hunt and seek out the darkness and destroy it. I love that she's finally found a place for that. Congrats.
This is a much more complete one-shot than "Not Again . . ." It ends with the perfect mixture of finality and possibility. The reader is given a snapshot of a moment in a much larger story and left to fill in the gaps and possibilities with her own imaginings. The premise is excellent and would otherwise be fully capable of being expounded into a larger story, but I prefer it as a one-shot. I think it would lose a great deal of its charm were it extended.
I wonder if this was written earlier? Your style is somewhat different. The first paragraph is a bit cumbersome, but overall, still, a lovely and enjoyable work.
I adored the ending.
Cheers, ~Allovara
Review By [allovara] • Date [16 Sep 09] • Not Rated
I have seen her given immortality before - but not from the spell - often simply without explanation. But you probably read more Buffy than I do... :~)
What a neat idea - that the spell would make her an immortal. I don't think I have ever come across the idea before - clever. I think I might like to read more of this Buffy in this place...
Comments from author:
Thanks for the compliment! But I have to be honest, the immortal idea is pretty common (A) I've read it a lot ;) I was worried it might come across as cliche, but it's always the way I see buffy: Lots older, but still young. Thanks for the review.