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Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Recent Donor)jcon
Review:
Damn pity you haven't posted more. Just found this fandom. Had an illness & spent too much time reading. Quite like it. Mixing Xander into it just about makes it perfect. I did like what you had written. Specially liked that the "one who see's" & "primal hyena" haven't been discovered yet. Would be a nice little chapter/s. Love to read Xander going face to face with Eric too. This was an interesting start.
Review By [(Recent Donor)jcon] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from copycatloki
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I like the story so far and really hope you plan to continue it eventually. :)
Review By [copycatloki] • Date [30 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
This is adorable! It's rather unexpected and I'm soo loving it... any thoughts on continuing?

cheers
MJ
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Nyn
Review:
Interesting start. I hope you continue. I love Xander paired with unexpected guys. Thanks!
Review By [Nyn] • Date [3 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from nukeswolf
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I hope there will be more? Please say that there is!
Review By [nukeswolf] • Date [23 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Elleria
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Interesting so far. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from zafaran
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Oh, now this is an *intriguing* start, and I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Rivana
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Yes please? Great crossover. :-)
Review By [Rivana] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from mokahi
Review:
Intriguing beginning. I'm looking forward to seeing Xander and Sam's relationship progress. Xander in the Southern Vampire world looks to be very interesting.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [19 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from bex
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OOOOh I've never read a xander-centered sookie fic before. You've made my first time memorable now I want more!
Review By [bex] • Date [19 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from pkoceres
Review:
This is really interesting so far, I'd love to see more of it!
Review By [pkoceres] • Date [19 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Tempe
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Interesting start so far. I'm curious to see how Sam's going to get around to finding Xander to be what he wants and what exactly Xander would be doing in Bon Temps, but I'm sure that will come as the story goes. Two suggestions for future postings:

1) Space the wording out a bit more. Some of the paragraphs were a bit long and it made for hard reading as unlike a book a computer is quite wide.

2) Try not to bash Sookie. I'm not sure if you were going in this direction or not as Sam was always a bit vocal about his dislike of Bill and therefor Sookie faced a little heat, but remember that Sam always loved Sookie. Even if it wasn't always love love. Did that make sense at all? Anyway, my point is that she's the main character of the series and it's always a good thing to respect that. I can't tell you the number of stories I've read on this site bashing Buffy or Willow and it leaves a sour taste in my mouth regardless of my personal feelings for the character.

Right then, great work so far and I can't wait for your next post!

(I hope I didn't come off all preachy)
Review By [Tempe] • Date [19 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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