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Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The New Slayer Arrives" from Harry
Review:
I remember Chloe from Smallville. Now, the big moment: THE DADDY IS REVEALED! (And I know who it is)
Comments from author:
I think Chloe could be a great Slayer.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Goodbye, Angel" from Harry
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Angel, you just can't accept it. The PTB and Buffy have made their choice. YOU ARE OUT! Learn to live with it Bub!
Comments from author:
Doesn't matter if he accepts it or not; he doesn't matter in this equation anymore.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Onto Faith and Wesley" from Harry
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Well, Faith took the news well. And Wesley seemed tickled pink to help train the new Slayer. And if the council tries to interrupt, I suspect that the PTB will give them a message that will make them think twice. Even QT is not stupid enough to disobey the PTB!
Comments from author:
My guess is that this Whistler would come up with some nice 'incentives' for Travers to stay away.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Telling the Gang" from Harry
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*Growls* If Walsh wasn't already dead, she WOULD BE when I got through with her! I may not be the type to go around beating up people, but WALSH deserved it! And I think that the gang finally understands that.
Comments from author:
She definitely makes me think torture isn't such a bad idea all the time.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A Gift For the Expectant Mother" from Harry
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I LIKE the way the PTB decided to turn the Slaying duties over to another. Buffy has earned her rest from those duties. Now, DRUMROLL PLEASE! And the Daddy is . . .
Comments from author:
Well, she's fulfilled her destiny a few times over - especially when you consider she was supposed to die at the end of the first season.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The New Slayer Arrives" from serenityselena
Review:
whew ..... what a tense situation ...
it worked out pretty well too ...
^__^
Comments from author:
I decided to have Buffy's support group be good this time. Sorry, but I don't consider Angel as part of her support system.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The New Slayer Arrives" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Great story. I like that you didn't go too far in bashing the Scoobies. Oh, will Clark show up in Sunnydale from time to time? Thanks for sharing this!
Comments from author:
Poor Xander sometimes just has terminal foot-in-mouth disease. He doesn't mean to say hurtful things, they just come out before he can stop them. I haven't decided on Clark yet, but it does interest Musie.
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The New Slayer Arrives" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
excellent read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Hope you like the rest of the series as well.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The New Slayer Arrives" from KiryD
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ok, so I'm reading the series way way late (too late to vote :(

at least maggie didn't try to get Lex's sperm. Tho I'm a bit surprised she didn't try to get Harmon Rabb Jr.'s or Jack O'Neill's (with 2 L's) either! as either of them could have been *ordered* to *coughs* produce a sample for whatever reasons.

but most excellent choice for the new Slayer (my next choice would have been Veronica Mars! -- then again, I so need to find some Veronica/Chloe fic...)

off to read more...
Comments from author:
Well, hopefully Musie will be able to answer the original challenge so Maggie can use O'Neill's sperm. Who knows, I have plenty of father candidates left that there could easily be a second series in the future. It certainly would be ironic for Chloe to be the new Slayer and have Buffy go to Smallville to be with the dad of her baby.
Review By [KiryD] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The New Slayer Arrives" from dreameralways
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OK. I missed this before, so now I understand why she can leave the hell mouth, but I'm surprised that she hasn't shown any reluctance. After all, she is condemning another girl to the life she tried so hard to escape. Even Buffy has to realize that during the time that she and Faith were getting along it was easier to stay alive. I hope Buffy at least stays in touch with Chloe in order to offer advice and such.
Comments from author:
Buffy knows that she can trust Wes and the Scoobies to take care of Chloe as best they can. She also knows that being pregnant, she would just be a liability to those around her. But if Chloe needs an older sister to lean on - metaphorically speaking - Buffy will be there for her. And once the baby comes, she'll help out physically if necessary.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The New Slayer Arrives" from spring
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TWO options! Oh you poor writer. Does this mean that you are going to write for both? I love this story.
Comments from author:
I know; I'm a glutton for punishment. I just couldn't ignore the fact that both of these guys were fan favorites. So enjoy both stories.
Review By [spring] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The New Slayer Arrives" from NyxxNoxx
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Chloe is the slayer... sweet. I think she'll get along with the gang quite well. Thankfully it won't be to much of a difference than from Smallville. Almost sounds like Giles might be staying with her the way he became fasinated by her telling of mutants from the rocks.

Sweet two different endings. It couldn't happen to luckier guys. Gibbs always deserved another chance to be a father. And I think that House would do everything/anything to straighten himself out to be there for Buffy and the baby.
Comments from author:
Poor Giles will have to learn to work one of those 'dread machines' to keep in contact with Chloe. Glad you like the endings.
Review By [NyxxNoxx] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The New Slayer Arrives" from RevDorothyL
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Chloe Sullivan is a great choice for new resident Slayer (even though her absence from Smallville might leave Clark without his only contemporary confidante who knows about his powers, in the future). Too bad for Clark (unless you're considering a future continuation of the adventures of Chloe-the-Slayer in Sunnydale?), but Chloe will be an excellent Slayer, and who knows? She may beat the odds, considering all that she's survived over the years on "Smallville"!
Comments from author:
It actually might be funny to have Chloe go back to Smallville for a visit, only to save Clark. LOL. D**n bunny! Leave my Musie alone!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The New Slayer Arrives" from Jaylynn
Review:
Yay! So glad you decided to do both versions! I look forward to reading them both.
Comments from author:
Couldn't help myself. Musie assumed control of the keyboard and forced me to write Gibbs' story.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The New Slayer Arrives" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
I'm hoping no voting is required however I'm quite pleased that Gibbs made the final cut! I shall look forward to reading all the installments...
Comments from author:
Nope. Voting is all over with. The readers get a twofer since Musie felt she had to write Gibbs' side.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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