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Review of chapter "X" from AXanFan
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I read some of the other reviews and I have to agree that this is a little creepy, but it is also kind of cool. I also agree that I am glad that you included Tara -- and Anya adds some comic relief.

However, I never like stories that have the main character as pretty much invincible. Drama comes from taking risks. Let's face it, X did not need any of their help and yet she had them risk themselves so she could show-off. I like that she has all the new powers, but there needs to be some weakness -- even if she had collapsed after expending so much power.

You write well and this is a compelling story -- keep at it.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X" from Anonymous Reviewer
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This is a very cool story never hear of anything like it please dont stop writeing it!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [27 Oct 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X" from Anonymous Reviewer
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i think this is a great idea for a story. how often do you plan to post new chapters?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [24 Oct 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Execellent start, I really like the premise of this one. I hope we get a little backstory on how Xander and Buffy almost died before the joining. I also like how you included Anya and Tara instead of just BX&W.

Rob
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [19 Oct 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Well, that was just WOW! I absolutely love the idea you came up with. And the explanations you gave were great. It actually made sense to me. Can't wait to read more!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [18 Oct 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X" from Anonymous Reviewer
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this is so great but i have a question: what about Dawn?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [18 Oct 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I like it.
It's kind of creepy, but I really like it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [17 Oct 03] • Not Rated
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