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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from chrysanthemum
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Fabulous story! I really like the s2 Buffy - she's interesting and moldable. I would love to see more of this story!
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from starshinedown
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I have really, really enjoyed reading through this story, and I hope that you are able to pick it back up and continue Buffy and Anakin's story.
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from BrownFinderth
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Awesome plot!! And eager to read more of it. Though the last update was last August '10, I hope that the author may be able to come back and add to this great tale!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from Kaiyama
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I love your take on Buffy, not some uber being, but a girl with some charismatic extras :) . Admittedly I do like the other kick butt Buffy stories, but I like all the history and different takes on the various personalities. Keep up the awesome work
Review By [Kaiyama] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from BuffyKaibaHunt
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Wow! Very brilliant and creative so far. :) I've read about plantations and slavery from long ago, and I've also read Runaway to Freedom by Barbara Smucker, as well as The Dear America books "A Picture of Freedom: The Diary of Clotee, a Slave Girl" and "I Thought My Soul Would Rise and Fly: The Diary of Patsy, a Freed Girl". Those are awesome books to read, and I highly recommend them as well. :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from PrincessAudrii
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Really enjoyed what you have written so far, and really hope that you finish it. Its one of the best COs for Buffy and Star Wars that I have read.
Review By [PrincessAudrii] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from deathgeonous
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Wow, angst much? Still good though. Well, thanks for writing this, please update soon, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
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Nice, looking forward to reading more.
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from LetsRandom
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Love what I've read so far and looking forward to future updates! Btw, are you planning to pursue beyond Episode 1/do it AU?
Comments from author:
I'm planning on going mostly AU after episode 1 but I do plan on following the story through to the rise of Darth Vader and the fall of the Jedi. RL has just been distracting lately.
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from BerserkerNW
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Great story! This is very well-written, with only a few typos scattered throughout. I enjoy the new spin you put on Buffy's inclusion in the Star Wars universe. Thanks for sharing this!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from AwesomeGeek
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And I am a Star Wars fan! LOL
Another awesome chapter hon and you make sounding wise seem very easy and effortless!
You know I want more, right?
Review By [AwesomeGeek] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from Keshkreature
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Very awesome! Looking forward to what comes next!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from Rissah
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I am probably not as knowledgable about the Star Wars universe as most, sometimes I struggle to follow along. That aside, I'm enjoying the story as you weave it along and am looking forward to coming chapters. I hope to see some further interaction between Padme and Buffy as it seems at odds with Buffy's force bond ability.

Nicely done. Waiting patiently for more of the saga to be revealed.
Review By [Rissah] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from borgrabbit
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Great chapter! Yeah. Wish she could keep up her slayer dreams and slayer strength on top of what the force supplies...as opposed to just force visions. Maybe mix em up? Could Sineya be involved?
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from fayefree
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First off thank you for a wonderful story, and I love the way you portrayed her. I had some free time and I read the whole thing in one sitting. I have been on a Buffy/Star Wars kick for about a month now and have developed some strong opinions on certain things. The biggest one is on the death of Qui-Gon. The stories that follow original storyline with him dying don't really bring anything new to the story and they become kind of tedious and long because there is nothing really new. The couple that I have read with him living to take Anakin on as his padawan has given the stories a new direction.
Another thing I have found is that after watching the movies reading books and some fanfiction is that the whole concept that the Jedi counsel it that clueless about what the Sith is doing right under their noses just doesn't work. This was one of the problems with the movies I had when they first came out.
I guess what I am trying to say is that the council needs to get a clue ,Lucas just made them to oblivious to what was going on and that just did not work for me. The council Qui-Gon and Buffy having a clue that something is wrong would bring more balance to the story as I have alway thought that Lucas was more interested in special effects of the battle scenes than in the story line.
I know that I probable am going to get flayed for these opinions but I think that the Jedi sniffing out clues, searching for answers would be a better store than blindly going to their doom.
Comments from author:
Oh no, I know what you mean. I kind of got myself into a bind with this story because I didn't know what I really wanted out of it at the beginning. But after this one (since I'm planning, hoping on making it a series), it's heading into more of an AU direction. I want to do different things and set it up so that it makes more sense that the Council didn't detect Sidious. I'll be doing more of that in my next story, when I focus on Buffy's training.

But the Jedi certainly won't be blindly going to their doom. Not if I have anything to say about it. ;)
Review By [fayefree] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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