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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from starwolf
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does she get to take a training saber with her?
Review By [starwolf] • Date [8 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from starwolf
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Ok, I'm current with your story. you do realize that with you back Buffy up to sixteen now after a year in Mos Espa that means Angel would have had to take her virginity on her 15th birthday not her 17th that just ewwww! not to make her a super jedi or anything but her affinity for weapons shouldn't have gone away. most of this is very very good. hope you can get back to it soon.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [8 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen: To the Stars" from starwolf
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just a couple of things. in chapter 7: after halloween, Buffy speaks fluent french. I thought the Maul fight was appropriate but lets face it you have her working in a scrap yard acting as a leg breaker. Buffy would always have a couple of knives on her. otherwise this has been very well done so far. hope to be caught up by tomorrow. thanks for the great story.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [8 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from chrysanthemum
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Fabulous story! I really like the s2 Buffy - she's interesting and moldable. I would love to see more of this story!
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from starshinedown
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I have really, really enjoyed reading through this story, and I hope that you are able to pick it back up and continue Buffy and Anakin's story.
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from BrownFinderth
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Awesome plot!! And eager to read more of it. Though the last update was last August '10, I hope that the author may be able to come back and add to this great tale!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from Kaiyama
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I love your take on Buffy, not some uber being, but a girl with some charismatic extras :) . Admittedly I do like the other kick butt Buffy stories, but I like all the history and different takes on the various personalities. Keep up the awesome work
Review By [Kaiyama] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from BuffyKaibaHunt
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Wow! Very brilliant and creative so far. :) I've read about plantations and slavery from long ago, and I've also read Runaway to Freedom by Barbara Smucker, as well as The Dear America books "A Picture of Freedom: The Diary of Clotee, a Slave Girl" and "I Thought My Soul Would Rise and Fly: The Diary of Patsy, a Freed Girl". Those are awesome books to read, and I highly recommend them as well. :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from PrincessAudrii
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Really enjoyed what you have written so far, and really hope that you finish it. Its one of the best COs for Buffy and Star Wars that I have read.
Review By [PrincessAudrii] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from deathgeonous
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Wow, angst much? Still good though. Well, thanks for writing this, please update soon, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
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Nice, looking forward to reading more.
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from LetsRandom
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Love what I've read so far and looking forward to future updates! Btw, are you planning to pursue beyond Episode 1/do it AU?
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I'm planning on going mostly AU after episode 1 but I do plan on following the story through to the rise of Darth Vader and the fall of the Jedi. RL has just been distracting lately.
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from BerserkerNW
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Great story! This is very well-written, with only a few typos scattered throughout. I enjoy the new spin you put on Buffy's inclusion in the Star Wars universe. Thanks for sharing this!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from AwesomeGeek
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And I am a Star Wars fan! LOL
Another awesome chapter hon and you make sounding wise seem very easy and effortless!
You know I want more, right?
Review By [AwesomeGeek] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from Keshkreature
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Very awesome! Looking forward to what comes next!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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