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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
Review:
After a lot wikipediaing i'm guessing Lightning Lad and Lightning Lass. The only red headed super-powered siblings i could find.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [30 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nyaneave
Review:
I love it, keep going, please?
Review By [Nyaneave] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Corris
Review:
I'd like to see more. As far as the crossover, I'm thinking Legion of Superheroes, or something like that. Although I did have a second guess at Willow's because my first thought was actually Danni Phantom. meh.
Review By [Corris] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tjack
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Since this story was put down some time ago I don't know if you're still taking guesses, but I think Cordy was going as Sensor Girl/Princess Projectra.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Markelo
Review:
Okay. I got Willow and Amy. Who did Dawn dressed as? Brainiac 16 didn't have any siblings. He was a robot.
Comments from author:
Brainaic 16? don't know who that is. The person that Xander dressed as does have a sibling, two infact. Hope this clears that up.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Blackguard
Review:
interesting start. looking forward to more. really wondering who the characters are dressed as.
Comments from author:
Sorry that it took me so long to answer you. Got grounded, than the computer broke and then, well you get the idea. I'm really glad that you like the story. The costumes will be revealed next chapter, or you could just look at the other reviews. I'm almost done with the next chapter, I think. So it should be up soon.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [1 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
An intriguing and well written opening.
Comments from author:
Thanx.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job, I'm hoping that you'll be adding more soon.
Comments from author:
Thankyou, I'll try but with mountians of school work, it may not happen.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Valandar
Review:
So... Buffy is Dream Girl? Oh, wait DRUSILLA as Dream Girl! >:)

And with the costumes chosen, a Cordy / Xander pairing looks imminent. Now the BIG question...

Who chose Supergirl / Andromeda?
Comments from author:
Ding Ding, we have a winner, Buffy is still Lady Useless. I might sequeeze Dru in. As for Supergirl and Andromeda, I'll let you in on a seceret. I really only know the animated version of the Legion. SuperGIRL wasn't in it. Only SuperMAN. So I'll only be using stuff from the animated series. If you don't know what I'm talking about, then look up the channel 99TY00 on youtube. S/He has posted I think every LOSH episode for both seasons, so you can go there to see what everyone looks like.
Review By [Valandar] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Zulaq
Review:
This is an interesting start. Though I do wonder just how well you will be able to balance so many changed characters. I know that others have guessed who everyone but Cordelia is, so I'll just make a quick guess as to who she is. And I think she is... Dream Girl. She has a costume I can just picture Cordelia in, and (depending on the version) their attitudes are (somewhat) similar.
Comments from author:
Oh... that's a very good idea, but Cordy's someone else. If I can squeeze it in, Dream Girl will have a small part as someone else. Now who do we know in Buffy that has visions of the future. I will most likely only be doing the Halloween episode before opening this up to other authors. I really have no idea where I'm going with this and did it because it was a tragedy there was no Legion stories on this site.
Review By [Zulaq] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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Well... some of them are LSH and some of them are X-men...that's about as far as I've gotten. Timberwolf and Wolverine were both drawn and somewhat design by Dave Cockrum, I believe he saw them as analog characters. So not sure which one Oz chose.
Comments from author:
Actually there all Legion members, but I can see hoe you would think they weren't.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Valandar
Review:
Okay, so Cordy is Saturn Girl?

As for an idea for Chuck... this may sound bizarre, but how about Angel? >:) It's the last costume in stock, and he decides he wants to take Buffy to a party of some kind...
Comments from author:
Angel *Laugh* Chuck *snort* oh that is good. Yeah, Cordy's Saturn Girl. the thing is, if I continue this, the parings would be based on the costumes, so Angel and Amy...yeah. on the other hand, I don't really know the Buffyverse so I will most likely only be doing the Halloween episode, before turning the story into one that anyone can add to, like a round robin. Or maybe I'll make Jonathan Bouncy. I'll think about it.
Review By [Valandar] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from salla
Review:
Theme - Legion of Superheroes

Xander - lightning lad
Dawn - lightning lass
Willow - Phantom Girl
Cordelia - no description given
Oz - Timberwolf
Unknown - Braniac 5
Amy - Duo Damsel (Triplicate Girl)

If you need help with any of the backstory for the Legionaires, a friend of mine has done a comprehensive history of all the legionaires that can be found at MajorSpoilers.com under the link for Hero Histories. You will need to click into the most recent (Connor - Superboy I think) and then there is a list of all the rest at the end, so you can focus on the characters you want. And when I say comprehensive, I mean comprehensive... he went through the backstory for each of the characters through each volume and how they change from one iteration to the next.

I look forward to reading more and seeing where you take this.
Comments from author:
Congrats on being the first person to guess everyone. As for Cordelia, she will be the one to see that something is wrong, her powers will help with that. I'm using the animated series because i don't know the comics that well so Lightning Lass will be Alya, the oh so cute little sister to Garth and Mekt. She may or may not have her powers, and Garth may or may not realize that she is alive, depending on which season I pull them from. I was hoping that people would think I was using THE Braniac, but you were to smart for me. LOL.
Review By [salla] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I'm totally confused, but I really look forward to more of your story.
Comments from author:
Here's hoping that you become unconfused. Thanks for liking it.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Xander = Lightning Ladd
Dawn = Lightning/Light Lass (She went by both names depending on her powers at the time.)

Cordelia = Dawnstar (Cordelia; with wings and wearing leather, what's not to love.)
Comments from author:
Well, you got Xander right and Dawn sorta right, but Cordy's not Dawnstar. I realize that I didn't really give a clue for Cordelia, but I couldn't think of a way to give her one. She doesn't like comics and would be to busy complaining to notice the costume. Here's a hint. "Cordy" will be the one to notice that something is wrong and that she is not herself. Hope that helps.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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