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Review of chapter "Voodoo Love Spells & the Carpenter Seal of Approva" from LeaFairy
Review:
Aww, the Dawn/Xander conversation was wonderful! I'm so glad that Dawn has at least one person from the Scoobies/Council that's still in contact with her. I also love that Xander really trust her and her decisions... She is after-all thirty years old. :)

Excellent chapter... I really can't wait to read more! Thanks so much for updating!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Voodoo Love Spells & the Carpenter Seal of Approva" from hbaked
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You updated! Yay!

So is Dawn's keyness going to set off alarms or will she be able to slide in under the radar and leave the supernatural world behind for alien horizons? Will she join Graham's team? How long until she meets mini-Jack and will it be love at first sight, hate at first sight or a gradual falling in love?

Hope you'll keep posting. Thanks for this chapter!
HB
Review By [hbaked] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Voodoo Love Spells & the Carpenter Seal of Approva" from AllenPitt
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I like it---hopefully she'll run into Miller and maybe somebody will wonder how they know each other... more interesting would be if, during 'routine' translation work, she comes across something magical or demonic, linking both 'worlds' (slayer/SGC)--- since most of her work would likely consist of just looking at photos of monuments & inscriptions. If she DOES go through the stargate, would her being the Key affect that in any way, I wonder?
Would the Asgard or Asgard sensors pick up anything about her? Low level radiation? I'd love it if some Ascended being got interested, ie "the Key" was important in something like recharging ZPMs back in the day ....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Voodoo Love Spells & the Carpenter Seal of Approva" from RevDorothyL
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I had to re-read the previous few chapters to get back up to speed (the special ops commando floral team from Riley's phone call stil makes me giggle), but I love that you're continuing with this, and the way you're taking the time to develop the relationships between the characters so fuly. Nice touch with Xander, of all the Scoobies, being unwilling to lose touch with Dawn AND being willing to trust her decisions regarding her own life.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're liking it so far. I appreciate you sticking with me!!

And the floral commando team still makes me giggle too ;)

Min
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Voodoo Love Spells & the Carpenter Seal of Approva" from (Past Donor)HiltonK
Review:
Really liking this set up.
Looking forwards to Dawn meeting the peeps in the SGC
Review By [(Past Donor)HiltonK] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Voodoo Love Spells & the Carpenter Seal of Approva" from Clandestine
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Yay, an update! Great chapter!
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from dreameralways
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I'm just picturing someone from the SGC reviewing her phone conversation and telling his superiors that while most of the conversation was confusing, it is obvious that they are missing something really significant from her past.
Interesting story. Can't wait for more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [2 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from LeaFairy
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Wow, this has been a pretty damn good story so far! I love your Dawn and her working for the SG program is just awesome. I'm also really enjoying the backstory of her relationship with Buffy and the others and why she's not really in-contact with them anymore. Well done.

I definitely can't wait to read more of this! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [1 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from banner
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"an elite and highly-trained floral commando unit?”
Just like Dawn, I had to stop and reboot my brain at that visual.

The conversation, and this entire chapter, is a delight. I enjoyed seeing a mature Dawn, and I always liked Riley. I bet Xander made his disgust *very* clear.
Review By [banner] • Date [30 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from purrfus
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The action and character introduction has been great. Loved the set up and conversation between Riley and Dawn. Looking forward to more.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from littleoldme
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I really like what you're doing here. I'm particularly impressed with how nuanced your Buffy/Dawn conflict is- it's completely believable with their characters and goes beyond the heavy handed "Dawn, good, Buffy, BAD" dynamic that most fics that take this angle dish out. I'm sad for Dawnie and the way that Buffy has inadvertently pushed her away, but very excited to see Dawn getting a new family at the SGC- one where she won't be the little sister and will finally get to be on even footing.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from Robby
Review:
uh, neat idea! Can't wait for more!
Review By [Robby] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from kaekae
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"a visit from an elite and highly-trained floral commando unit"
That has to be one the funniest lines ever. ;)
Review By [kaekae] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from (Past Donor)athenewolfe
Review:
Oh wonderful beginning to a new story! I really really really enjoyed this!
Review By [(Past Donor)athenewolfe] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from Carojen
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I had some doubts in the beginning, but this story is definitely worth to read. Good chapter and hoping for more.
Review By [Carojen] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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