Review of chapter "Chapter One" from techservlib
"…Though I am still rather surprised that they still call it a 'video' store, given that their entire stock is comprised of DVDs and Blu-Rays,”
Just a quibble, but Spenser would know that DVDs and Blu-Rays are as much videos as VHS are ...
Comments from author:
*dives under bed*
*covers ears and hums*
I'm not listening! Well, reading!
I call DVDs and Blu-Rays movies, not videos, but you make a valid argument. However, at this stage, I don't quite know if it is worth it to change the story, given that the person I wrote it for has read it. But thank you for the information, I will certainly keep it in mind for future reference.
Review By [techservlib
] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Not Rated