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Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from leb
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this is a good story, I hope to read more soon
Review By [leb] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from Netchka
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Just read this again. Can't wait for more to come.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from Netchka
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Just read this again. Still very good. Can't wait for more chapters to come. Boss Dawnie, still the same even in a new reality.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from Vickzie
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Wicked story, love Dawn as the Nimir-Ra
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from greysh
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I like this dawn a lot! I hope that you will continue with this crossover.
Review By [greysh] • Date [28 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from mariegilbert
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Love tabula rasa for the name, and here's to hoping you update soon!
Review By [mariegilbert] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from SlowMercury
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Very interesting! Dawn as a 14 year old wereleopard alpha is an idea so strange that I wouldn't have thought it could be done successfully, but you definitely have. I actually can't wait to see the other shifter groups' reaction to the juvenile alpha, and I'm looking forward to the Beastmaster's visit, because I want to see how Dawn will handle it. I also really like the idea that Willow resurrected the wrong Buffy (although you haven't said if that theory is correct or not)--if it is true, that will let Buffy travel after Dawn without feeling guilty about abandoning the Scoobs.

I have to say, though, that if the Powers (or Monks or whoever) were looking to give Dawn a protector, they really missed with Nathaniel. He kept her safe as well as could be expected, and it sounds like she was physically okay, but her mental trauma has *got* to be through the roof. Nate, unlike Buffy, wasn't an adult and didn't have sufficient power to protect Dawn against all comers. Maybe there aren't

I like how Nathaniel is gaining confidence without even really realizing it. This was a nice interlude chapter. Please keep up the good work!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from MistofRainbows
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Sounds like things are going in a better direction for Dawn things days, it's nice.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from LeaFairy
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Awesome, I am so happy for an update! Fantastic chapter too! I loved reading a little bit more about Nathaniel and I really love that you're having him grow into a stronger character- something that Anita never let him do. While he'll never be an Alpha, and will probably always be submissive, I love the hints of him becoming more assertive. Simply wonderful growth. Dawnie's going to be so proud =)

Also, I absolutely love the idea of Dawn's potion and how it's going to change the Lycanthrope world. The names (Tabula Rasa and Taboo Tonic) are pretty brilliant as well.

Anyways, I enjoyed the chapter and I definitely look forward to reading more in the future! Thanks for the update!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from BrainsInAVat
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I was so happy to see this story updated! Love the possibilities you've opened up for Dawn and her Pard!
Review By [BrainsInAVat] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from Nightscream
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Yeah! Update! I love the fact that you are slowly building up Nathaniel, That's the one thing that Anita can never seem to get. Its a slow building process. Every time Nathaniel tries to make a decision for himself, Anita just says no and overrides it, instead of offering up alternate choices, thus plunging him back downward.

I hope you find time to update again soon, I do enjoy this fic.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude with Nathaniel" from (Moderator)Ava
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*imitates Oliver Twist* Please, ma'am, may I have some more?

I just stumbled across this little gem and yay! I'm not sure I buy Buffy being out of commission for weeks after her resurrection because if she was in that bad of shape she would have never have be able to dig her way out of her grave. I do like the idea of Giles helping Buffy locate Dawn even if they never find her.

It's fun to see Dawn a strong central character and Nathaniel making his own choices. He's a decent character in later books and I might have adored him and Jason in the last one. (That was pretty much all I adored of the last book, but I digress.) I hope it's not a year between updates, but I'm pretty patient and now tracking so I should be good. :)
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of story "Dawn Graison" from KatieKat
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I've been enjoying reading your story. I like hearing people rant about things. But if your that disappointed about the books and the characters in them well then change them. this is your story there is nothing saying that you have to stick completely true to cannon.
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Dawn Graison" from Calex
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I think the best thing about fanfiction is the fact that at the end of the day, the story you write is essentially YOURS. You're allowed a little bit of creative license. The AB books might have moved in a direction that most of its readers dislike (and I count myself among them) and most of the plot seems to disappear behind gratuitous sex scenes and the characters start to become more and more unlikeable, but it's fact that there was something about them in the beginning that was WORTH something. I think what might be a good idea, if you want to continue writing this story, is for you to stop reading the new books. From the looks of things, you're starting things from the beginning, so just inform yourself of any major plot points of the new books and use the characterisation LKH uses in the beginning. Put your own spin on it. Fill them out as characters from what you know of them from the earlier books. Find something about them that will make you ENJOY writing this story, these characters again. That's my two cents, anyway. Hope that helps. I do hope you continue this story, as I'm enjoying the take you have on the AB and BtVS verses. And I enjoy the way you write. Good luck!
Review By [Calex] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Dawn Graison" from toowhiteprincess
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Try finding the things you like about the charecter. Yes, it may be small. Anita is very hateful but she protects the underdog. I think Anita is scared of everyone around her because she does not love herself. She is a very insecure person.

Don't fight the charecters work with them. Write the chapter then put it away for a day or a week. Then reread it. You may want to change what you wrote. Erase a page if you feel like it. Talk to your beta(s) about what you think about doing to future chapters.
Review By [toowhiteprincess] • Date [8 Dec 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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