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Review of chapter "Life Goes On?" from shakeval
Review:
finally read this again and when i came to the end i noticed that it sure has been a long time since the last update, which is too bad, i'm hoping it's not dead, but with how long it's been i'm not really holding onto any hope that there will suddenly be a couple more chapters anytime soon, i'm sure you've lost interest or just run out of ideas.
regardless it's a great story and i enjoyed reading it all the way through a second time.
Review By [shakeval] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Goes On?" from carmsfic
Review:
This story is hilarious. I hope you post more I can't wait to see what Stewie has planned for the Mayor also I'm curious as to what you have planned for the Halloween Ep. Thank for posting and keep up the great work.
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hello there. You must be..." from TTrunks
Review:
This is an interesting story, and I'll admit I'm interested in reading the rest. But I was wondering, why didn't Xander snap and growl at everyone?

Stewie I can understand, but Jenny put HIS Willow in danger. Their pack, and Xander is from what I understand sort of the Alpha even if he's the Alpha below Stewie. Also if Jenny is a "dog" then an outsider put his pack in danger that would cause a violent response from any Alpha. I understand Xander wouldn't kill her but maybe rage or something at it. It also seems like Giles making fun of it would piss him off some.

Another question I've been wondering about, why isn't Stewie afraid of Xander? Xander's pack spirit was stronger that's part of the reason he had a harder time controlling it. You said earlier that as time passes Xander will get stronger to the point of beaing stronger than the slayer ((As he was in cannon, atleast in the Pack episode)) it seems like he'd be a bit worried about Xander snapping his neck or something I mean even Stewy sleeps and is human. If Xander had to choose between protecting his pack and Stewie...
Review By [TTrunks] • Date [15 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Goes On?" from nemogbr
Review:
Enjoying the romp.

Stewie makes a good addition to the Scooby Gang and of course as the Evil Overlord.
I would have thought that they would have moved to a bigger house by now. Perhaps a mansion somewhere with a nice batcave?
Good to see Marcie is being developed and Kendra has a new life. I don't know why fanfics tend not to focus on these characters when they can be developed.
Will you include Amy Madison?

I can see him taking over one of the System Lord's territories. Why focus on one planet when he could have an inter-stellar Empire?

Would prefer to add more reviews, but my computer at home needs rebuilding...lol
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review and the great ideas.
Amy should be for later in the season.
Might make her part of Xander's girls.

As far as the empire building... To infinity and beyond...? LOL


Raf.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [16 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Goes On?" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Goes On?" from eriktheviking
Review:
Cordelia in underwear, Dru in her birthday suit, Jenny & Buffy wearing what?

Definitely smile worthy developments, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Raf.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "P.T.A. sucks." from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Yes, most of the time Joyce was a very cool mom. I agree with Cordy, I would rather my children be gay or bi than dating a vampire. Actually I'd like my children to date any type of Human rather than date an undead corpse, even if it had a soul. Lol! Now I'm wondering if Stewie's improved sarcophagus can bring Dru back to life. Yet another nice update. Well done and please keep them coming.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
RAF.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "P.T.A. sucks." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
RAF.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "P.T.A. sucks." from eriktheviking
Review:
Great update, but I'm not sure who got the best of the deal.
Comments from author:
Xander. He got his Willow back. The sword is just a tool with a tracker that they can use to track Spike. He doesn't know that Stewie already knows.

Thanks for the review.

RAF.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Insane you say..." from darthridian
Review:
nice addition mate, hope to read more soon, just wondering why is joyce angry at buffy? doesn't she already know about what buffy does?

keep up the great writing.
Comments from author:
She knows that she's the Slayer, but Snyder paints her as a trouble maker, and not pulling her weight in her studies.

It'll be ironed out, and the true picture of Snyder will emerge.

Thank you for the review.
Raf.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [30 Mar 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Insane you say..." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Insane you say..." from eriktheviking
Review:
And here I thought, naively, that Cordelia would change due to being in a relationship.

Great fun, thanks.
Comments from author:
She never really did at the beginning of any other relationship during the S1 , and S2, and a bit in S3.
Thank you for the review.
Raf.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who's afraid of the Big Bad Pink..." from dhampirkinfolk
Review:
Barney isn't pink. He's purple and green.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

I couldn't remember the colors.

Raf.
Review By [dhampirkinfolk] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "School... Meh!" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "School... Meh!" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun and I am looking forward to the Mayor's mistake of trying to implement said blackmail.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

I don't know. Stewie's a businessman.
I'm sure he'll hear him out and string him along. Besides, it's not like he doesn't know that his mother plays with his toys sometimes, but then she's his mother. She's the only one allowed to play with them.

Raf.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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