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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Pardon, I'm a bit muzzy headed at the moment, but I very much enjoyed what you have here so far and wanted to let you know that before I forget if I manage to get some sleep tonight. I'm definitely starting the tracking on this story though, because I sincerely hope that you can finish it at some point!

Your alternate universe is a very interesting and fresh take on the nature of Dawn and exactly who and what she is. I very much look forward to seeing the rest of this, if you can get an opportunity to do so! Even if you don't though, thank you for sharing this bit, it is an intriguing premise.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ohaa i can't wait for the conflict to happen :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from LeaFairy
Review:
It's completely awesome to see an update on this! I simply adored the chapter! I wonder if they'll finish the 'cleansing' before the Scoobies get there though? It's sure to be an interesting reunion/meeting between everyone no matter what...

I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the fabulous chapter!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Seems a bit screwy, messing with people's minds is breaking a law of magic. It seems to me that some parts of this wouldn't work. I can't really see Morgan not having soul gazed Dawn before either but that's just me. Honestly I liked Dawn being the key much better. I can't see Dawn just leaving. Even if as you say she's not really Dawn, it's stupid not to tie up lose ends. And your dawn seems like a scared little bitch. Ah well such is life, there are some things that are mildly amusing, and others... Sorry but last I checked Dresden didn't have horrible taste in food. He also sucks at making charms compared to his mother. So the idea of him being able to duplicate her spell work on the bracelet.... sorry. I don't mean to be negative. Normally I love your stuff, this chapter just seemed odd to me.

Edit: Ah that makes more sense.
Comments from author:
I've only read the first book, most of this is TV verse, so there's not so much on mind-magic. Anyways, not everything is for everyone, thanks for your opinion, love xx Shezzi
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Glad to see another chapter of this!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bobboky
Review:
nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Innogen
Review:
Good thing that Willow hasn't broken any Council Laws *yet* ::grin:: - I hope she learns real quick about the straight and narrow, or she will be in big big trouble!

Glad you are back!

~Innogen

As always, your writing is impeccable.
Review By [Innogen] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Very very interesting. The buildup is going well. Hope to see more soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice background infos and I just hope the SD Crew won't mess up to much(but I fear my hope
will be shattered soon)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [4 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Morgan soulgazing Dawn? ohhhooo..
and poor Harry will have a visit from California soon :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [3 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from firebreather
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I can only hope you'll update this sometime in the future. It's really good, and I can't wait to see were you're going with this.
Review By [firebreather] • Date [17 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice first chapter. I always like Harry Dresden stories and this starts very interestring.
thank you.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [16 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from LeaFairy
Review:
Another excellent chapter!

I loved the bit with Harry and Morgan and I so look forward to when Morgan soulgazes Dawn. I also can't wait for the Scoobies to arrive and meet Harry, Bob and the 'real' Dawn... I have a feeling that the meeting between them will be totally drama-filled. *nods* lol.

I look forward to reading more... Thanks for the update!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Glad to see another chapter of this, as always.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Pandion
Review:
I see your mainly taking Dresden from the show and not the books? Wonder if you have had a chance to read the books as the characters are a lot more fleshed out and more interesting to be honest. Especially the reasons why Morgan is so Homicidal when it comes to Harry.

Good Cross and I am enjoying it. And hope to see more soon

Edit

Ah that explains a few things :D Would be interested to see if your characters change at all as you read the later books, hope to see more of this story as there is surprisingly few good crosses with Dresden, other than a few one shots.

I must say that the books are a guilty pleasure of mine :D Thanks for the reply

Second Edit :D

Very true but then not everything can be Shakespeare can it :D Sometimes all you want is some good chewing :D
Comments from author:
I've started reading the first book...have met Morgan once so far. But Morgan's reasons don't actually exist in my universe...

Glad you're liking it, thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi

They are kind of like candy, aren't they - they call them 'bubblegum for the brain' at the bookshop :)
Review By [Pandion] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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