Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from FireDragon
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Good riddance to Xander and Willow. Looking forward to the next chapter, and I can't remember if you ever said who her real father is?
Review By [FireDragon] • Date [20 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from AllegraCousland
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I'm so delighted that you've continued this! I enjoy Scoobies vs the Slayer fic and particularly love the way the group has divided, as well as Faith's inclusion! Eager to read more!
Review By [AllegraCousland] • Date [19 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from vladt
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really great read, thank you.
Review By [vladt] • Date [19 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from firedrakegirl
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I'd forgotten how much I enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for the update!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from RevDorothyL
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Glad to see things looking up for Buffy!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from Martin
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The Joyce bashing makes a lot of sense for this story. That is it is needed to advance the plot, but it seems like you are bashing the scoobies just for the fun of it and you have a personal vendetta against them.
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from immortalsilence
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finally see the back of the non believers thank god, love it thanks more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [19 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from SariLane
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oz needs to go to Miami, and I can't wait for Diana to tell xander and willow to piss off.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from bradsan
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Buffy an anomaly. I'm thinking that Buffy is needed and losing her Slayer abilities would make her a target after slaying for so long and killing three master vampires etc.. So keeping her powers doesn't seems strange to me and another point, Diane probably doesn't know that Buffy became stronger after her death. The only one who probably knows is Angel because he was the one who asked how she feels and she told him that she feels good and stronger. I can't remember Buffy telling Giles or the other about that. She even became stronger after her second dead. So Buffy is needed by the PTB.
I can't wait when Buffy gets her memory back. I'm glad she is finally leaving Sunnydale. I only hope she gets her memory back real soon because I don't like her being helpless.
Good update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from DarkTopaz
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ohh fallout cometh
Review By [DarkTopaz] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from clarityfades
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Yay! Buffy's getting away from the buttheads! & I love that Giles was quite unimpressed with how they acted...same with Diana. Maybe we can have a short chapter after Buffy & Giles are in Florida where we see Xander & Willow get shot down from helping Faith in ANY way. Ha! Especially with Oz there to help out with the research--I'm guessing Diana will be more versed in technology than Giles, so it's not like she'll need a ton of extra help. Oh yeah, & Faith can shoot Xander down (harshly) any day now. :D Great update! I can't wait to see Buffy in Miami & see her rebuild her relationship with her dad. Kinda hope that when/if she gets her memory back that she tells no one in Sunnydale except Oz & Faith...the rest can suck it. Just sayin'. :)
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from Harry
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*Starts singing On the Road again by Willie Nelson* And that is what it is: Time to get On the Road again. Only this time, its not to England or Sunnydale. No, this time its to Miami Florida. And while Oz may be helping out Faith, its time Buffy started regaining her memory. And with the help of these relatives, its going to be a Family Affair in doing so.
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from BaronScrewtape
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I have been really enjoying this fic. I hope you come back to it soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I don't think I'm going to like the next chapter, but it's required before I can get back to the fun stuff, so...
Review By [BaronScrewtape] • Date [6 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from angeluscado
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So, I know it's been a year since you updated, but is there any way you're going to continue this? I really love the premise and I'd love to see how Buffy mixes in with the rest of the CSI Miami crew.
Comments from author:
I am; in fact I'm attempting to work out the next chapter now. Just have to decide how ugly the goodbye should get between Buffy/Giles and the Scoobies.
Review By [angeluscado] • Date [3 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from NoirDetective
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This is very interesting take on buffys family relationships and. It was very interesting to read I hope it isn't abandoned I really would love to next chapter Cheers ND
Comments from author:
Nope, not abandoned, just not a lot of time to be writing these days.
Review By [NoirDetective] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]