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Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from greenfalcon
Review:
Recently went back to your earlier stories to reread as I do from time to time with my favorite author's and this story I hope you get inspired to continue soonish another early story I would like to see you pick up is your buffy/charmed/smallvle story upon retreading that I still enjoyed it but I could see how your writing has improved over time and would like to see where you would take that story today ( or if you had time to do an edit to the original) but anyway always look forward to any updates to any of your stories. Is it just me or are the amount of "good" buffy centric writers (like yourself) being over shadowed by so many super Xander or super willow writers who can't really write beyond a sixth grade level.
Comments from author:
Now that August is over, I do want to work on finishing some more of my open fics. I don't want to post any more sequels until I'm down to just one or two open fics.

This really does feel like it's becoming a mostly Xander site. Hopefully the pendulum will swing back soon.
Review By [greenfalcon] • Date [29 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from starwolf
Review:
Ok, I just finished the story to date. its a interesting twist on the usual. I like the direction your going. You mentioned NCIS in one of the notes, what is the connection there? hope to see more soon. thanks for sharing
Comments from author:
I wrote Ducky as Joyce's uncle, but it was more of a mention in passing, so you'd probably have to go back and re-read the chapter to catch it. I'll try working on this once August is over.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from bradsan
Review:
Don't forget this one pretty, pretty please.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Cause and Effect" from Oxnate
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I'm not sure if I'll read this fic yet. I'm going to give it a go, but your stories tend to have more bashing than I can handle. I just wanted to tell you the story of how I got here.

I was reading the forum and thread had links to some 'Cracked' articles about fanfiction. http://forum.tthfanfic.org/index.php?topic=8118.0

Then just when I'm almost done with them, one of the articles lists crossover stories. One about CSI Miami and Buffy. Low and behold it's yours. http://www.cracked.com/article_19084_5-reasons-pop-culture-run-by-fan-fiction_p2.html

Anyway, just thought you'd like to know.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I sort of appreciate the 'advertising' that Cracked gave my story. The problem is that my story has nothing to do with the CSI folks getting help from Buffy. They're the ones helping her in this story, and as the summary warns, this story has bashing in it.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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Good riddance to Xander and Willow. Looking forward to the next chapter, and I can't remember if you ever said who her real father is?
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [20 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from AllegraCousland
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I'm so delighted that you've continued this! I enjoy Scoobies vs the Slayer fic and particularly love the way the group has divided, as well as Faith's inclusion! Eager to read more!
Review By [AllegraCousland] • Date [19 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from (Current Donor)vladt
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really great read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [19 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from firedrakegirl
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I'd forgotten how much I enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for the update!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from RevDorothyL
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Glad to see things looking up for Buffy!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from Martin
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The Joyce bashing makes a lot of sense for this story. That is it is needed to advance the plot, but it seems like you are bashing the scoobies just for the fun of it and you have a personal vendetta against them.
Review By [Martin] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from immortalsilence
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finally see the back of the non believers thank god, love it thanks more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [19 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from SariLane
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oz needs to go to Miami, and I can't wait for Diana to tell xander and willow to piss off.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from bradsan
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Buffy an anomaly. I'm thinking that Buffy is needed and losing her Slayer abilities would make her a target after slaying for so long and killing three master vampires etc.. So keeping her powers doesn't seems strange to me and another point, Diane probably doesn't know that Buffy became stronger after her death. The only one who probably knows is Angel because he was the one who asked how she feels and she told him that she feels good and stronger. I can't remember Buffy telling Giles or the other about that. She even became stronger after her second dead. So Buffy is needed by the PTB.

I can't wait when Buffy gets her memory back. I'm glad she is finally leaving Sunnydale. I only hope she gets her memory back real soon because I don't like her being helpless.

Good update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from DarkTopaz
Review:
ohh fallout cometh
Review By [DarkTopaz] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from clarityfades
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Yay! Buffy's getting away from the buttheads! & I love that Giles was quite unimpressed with how they acted...same with Diana. Maybe we can have a short chapter after Buffy & Giles are in Florida where we see Xander & Willow get shot down from helping Faith in ANY way. Ha! Especially with Oz there to help out with the research--I'm guessing Diana will be more versed in technology than Giles, so it's not like she'll need a ton of extra help. Oh yeah, & Faith can shoot Xander down (harshly) any day now. :D Great update! I can't wait to see Buffy in Miami & see her rebuild her relationship with her dad. Kinda hope that when/if she gets her memory back that she tells no one in Sunnydale except Oz & Faith...the rest can suck it. Just sayin'. :)
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
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