Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kaleecat
Definitely sad and well done. A needed follow up to Jesse's death; it was so glossed over in the show which made no sense after spending the time to establish that Jesse, Xander & Willow had been friends for a long time. Xander in particular should have had some follow through.
I'm also glad to see some bonding between Xander, Carl and Tom.
Comments from author:
Yep, Xander definitely deserved some sort of comfort and care after loosing his best friend like that, even if us writers think there was something more to it. And yep, he definitely needs the help and support of his family, since Tom and Carl care more for him than certain other people do, but aren't pushing things to happen.
They're letting Xander set the pace, which is a key to truly getting to know him and understand him.
So yep, I'm keeping it in canon, for the most part and I'll hit some of the further parts of interest later on down the line, not sure which ones yet, but I'm definitely planning on doing the Darth Willow Episode, and probably the mess with the first. Beyond that, not sure yet.
Review By [kaleecat
] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated