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Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from mamarhea
Review:
I have high hopes for this story. Please update soon.
Review By [mamarhea] • Date [27 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from amazonsummons
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it's very lovely, your wrting style. Kinda morose but hopeful. I like it, I hope that Dawn stays intouch with the Scoobies
Review By [amazonsummons] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from spring
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I like it so far, I look forward to what you do with this.
Review By [spring] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from scottm
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Great start for the fic. Keep up the wonderful writing.
Review By [scottm] • Date [10 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from Emeraldfire
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Well, your English is excellent! I hope you continue this story soon!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [10 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from WinterRayne
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Great start cannot wait for more.
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from saturnssailor
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I love your story. You should definitely continue with it and I never would have noticed that English wasn't your first language if you hadn't mentioned it. Your English is probably better than mine. ;p
Review By [saturnssailor] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from LeaFairy
Review:
Incredible beginning! I love that Dawn and the 'key' are becoming one... It's a different, but awesome idea.

I would definitely like to read more!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from mac
Review:
Love it so far! As for your English; you write better than some people I know - including me!
More please?!
mac x
Review By [mac] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from AonGealach
Review:
Love the idea of Dawn and the Key merging and becoming one being. I can't wait to see you put the nw and more mature Dawn into the Twilight world either. I do hope that you wont just take Dawn and plop her into Bella's role in the story for every aspect of the tale. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from Fighter
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The idea of a Edward/Dawn pairing really appeals to me. I can't wait to see how their relationship comes about.
Review By [Fighter] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from RowanChick
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Awesome!!! I love having Dawn in it and the changes of her bonding with the key essence coz she spilled blood was great!!! good job can't wait for a update.
Review By [RowanChick] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from KatieKat
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I like it and I definately think that you should continue the story and if you need a beta I would be more than happy to beta for you.
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from SariLane
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I think that this was an excellent beginning and I can't wait for more.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Aberrations" from Jaylynn
Review:
I think you should continue, its an interesting start and I know I would like to see where it goes.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'll try and keep up on the "interesting" front! :)
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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