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Review of chapter "We meet again *rewritten*" from DesitaniaF
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I hope you have the chance to add to this story soon.
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We meet again *rewritten*" from twlight
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This is a wonderful story. I do hope that you are able to update this again soon
Review By [twlight] • Date [26 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We meet again *rewritten*" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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nice meeting with the companions and please don't let this story become a
slash fic.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [11 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We meet again *rewritten*" from spring
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I love the rewrite, very subtle. I see that you changed Kellan from being male to female excellent! (that was the reason I was reading this again before an update, to review again). I do have to say that you missed one of the him to her when Xander was asking about Kellan. The changes in this last chapter are wonderful. I look forward to when Xander and Angel start being true lifebonded as they were in their past, lol that should be fun. As always I love this story and I eagerly await the next installment.
Review By [spring] • Date [8 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We meet again *rewritten*" from Jezzibel
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Wonderful, just wonderful. You handle the characters beautifully. Can't wait for more.

Two things, Collegium has a 'u', not an 'a', and the ' in Yfandes comes from the short form 'Fandes, and doesn't exist when the 'Y' is included.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I knew I was spelling that wrong but I couldn't figure out how. and thank you for clearing up the ' problem
Review By [Jezzibel] • Date [29 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We meet again *rewritten*" from spring
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Wonderful chapter. As I said in my last review I am currently reading Magic's Pawn. I can't help it but when it comes to the gifts that the Heralds have I get picky. Tylendel's gifts were Mage-Gift, Thought-Sensing, Fetching, and a bit of Empathy. Vanyel on the other hand had these gifts: Mindspeach, Feaching, FarSight, ForeSight, Empathy, Firestarting, Mage-Gift, and The Bardic Gift. The only gift that he really didn't have was Healing. (This is a quote from the book) Also it's Yfandes not Y'fandes. I am sorry if I seem to be over critical but this is so good and I think that if you have all of the info possable it would be even better. Again I love this story so far and I eagerly await the next chapter.
Comments from author:
My thoughts on the gifts are while they're the same souls they are different people Much like Tylendel/Stefen. Tylendel's gifts are as you mentioned, But Stefen had the Bardic gift with (what seems to me to be) a slight healing gift.
The only things Remaining true for the reborn heralds is that they are going to be chosen again. If they have one or more gifts that are the same that is coincidence.

As for Y(')fandes I remember seeing it in both forms but as my copy of Magic's Pawn is currently AWOL I can't reference that.

Thank you for bringing these things up.
Review By [spring] • Date [29 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We meet again *rewritten*" from Pardryll
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Despite the speed things are happening at (all at once), this is an excellent story. *adds to her recommendations!*
Comments from author:
Thank you. ;-) I'll try to slow it down a little. This is my first serious attempt at fanfiction.
Review By [Pardryll] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Lightning storms *Rewritten*" from spring
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This is wonderful, I love how you are meshing everyone into the different roles from the books. I'm reading Magic's Pawn again for oh the 50th time so reading this is really cool. I have to wonder if you are going to give Angel and Xander the Bardic Gift as they both had it. Van had that gift when all of his gifts were blasted compleatly open as in they were all extremely strong with the exception of healing and empathy. Van could take the place of fave hearld mages on his own. Also remember that Stef, was able to remove pain from people when he played his music. Again I love this story so far and I eagerly await the next installment.
Review By [spring] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The sights we share *Rewritten*" from VillageOrchid
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Well, everyone seems to be taking this reincarnation from another dimension thing pretty well. Perhaps it has only activated now for the danger or an aggregate number of souls that are supposed to be in play.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lightning storms *Rewritten*" from DesitaniaF
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poor Xan... so I guess you're gonna have it so its a while after the modern day books? are you going to have Xan and Angel remember what they did after dying? and is Joyce gonna remember being Sayvil as well as getting her memories of Aunt Savil?

and if you are including modern stories you couldnt be able to bring Leareth back since Leareth was the same person as Ma'ar back during the Mage Wars and Falconsbane in the modern stories, Firesong ripped him apart on the astral plane, he's faced judgment from the Star-Eyed and gone to the afterlife, and idk how likely a guy that evil is to be reincarnated...
Comments from author:
Quite a while later.
No I'm not because I'm really not sure what they did.
Yes and she is also going to be chosen

I have only read Last Herald Mage trilogy, Take a Thief, and Burning Brightly so that's news to me.
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lightning storms *Rewritten*" from MerKat
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Oh how sad about Xander and his brothers(past and present). This story is very good. More soon?
Review By [MerKat] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Lightning storms *Rewritten*" from nightowl
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Love this. How will xander get over the fact that he staked jesse who turns out to be his brother? Great story.
Review By [nightowl] • Date [25 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What now? *Rewritten*" from DennSedai
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Uh oh, trouble in paradise. Lots of things boiling up and boiling over it appears.
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What now? *Rewritten*" from TaraLi
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Angel & Xander = Vanyel & Tylendel? And still life-bonded?

Methinks you might need to flip the slash flag on this story very soon.
Comments from author:
there won't be any slash in this story but there will be in the next one tis why I haven't added the slash tag.
Review By [TaraLi] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What now? *Rewritten*" from slmncpm
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oh dear.. some people don't know when to leave well enough alone. do they?
Comments from author:
No. No they don't. ^w^
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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