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Review of chapter "III. Explain the Unexplainable" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story...
hope you will continue it ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "III. Explain the Unexplainable" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome story so far, I loved it. I can't wait to read more.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "III. Explain the Unexplainable" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
This fic is a great idea badly written.

Marines and sailors are two different critters and Gibbs as a former Marine knows the difference (I'm a former sailor so I also know the difference). You also keep slipping between tenses so while I'll continue tracking this unless it undergoes a major rewrite I probably won't read any more of it.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [31 Jan 11] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "III. Explain the Unexplainable" from Cmiller
Review:
I hope you haven't forgot about this story because it was just getting good.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "III. Explain the Unexplainable" from firedrakegirl
Review:
More please, great story!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "III. Explain the Unexplainable" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great chapter, but the dead Petty Officer was a sailor, Navy, not Marine Corp.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [9 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "III. Explain the Unexplainable" from FireWolfe
Review:
Interesting so this is a blade xover?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [9 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "III. Explain the Unexplainable" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am enjoying your story. But there is one thing that keeps bothering me a lot. You keep calling the new vamps "Marines" but giving their ranks as petty officers. Non-commissioned officer sailors are petty officers or chief petty officers. Marines above the rank of private or private first class are non-commissioned officers or NCOs or Sergeants. I know I am nitpicking, but it just bugged me. Other than that, I think you are doing a nice job with the characters and I look forward to seeing how the Scoobies freak when they see Booth. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I. What's the Rush" from Ramenth
Review:
Interesting story; you don't often see these fandoms paired in a very good way. This looks great, though you have a few minor things that stick out. DNA is about as concrete as proof gets, and Ziva joined the team just after Kate died. Like a week after.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [9 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "II. The Tale of Two Stiffs" from firedrakegirl
Review:
Interesting. More please!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [4 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "II. The Tale of Two Stiffs" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Gee, I wonder what will happen next? Can't wait to find out.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "II. The Tale of Two Stiffs" from spk
Review:
Still definitely intrigued. Can't wait to see how it all comes together. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I. What's the Rush" from spk
Review:
I am definitely intrigued. Love the fandoms you're using, so I can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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