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Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from spacey
Review:
This was so good and I so did not expect it to rate above 'tolerable'
Comments from author:
LMAO, why, because it is space fic?

Glad you liked it!
Review By [spacey] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Ansku
Review:
Brilliant :)
Comments from author:
Glad you liked this one :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Mezek
Review:
I was kind of wary of the whole sci-fi aspect, but you pulled it off very well. The twist with the planet being aware and sentient was great! And Sam and Dean: being actual brothers, having to deal with their pasts - shared and separate, their abilities and personalities, it was an exciting look at how jarringly different and eerily similar they could be. The way you used and incorporated Sam's telepathy - awesome! And certainly not least, the intimate moments between the two were... let's leave it at 'wow'. It's less embarrassing. Marvelous work, can't to see what y'all come up with next!
Comments from author:
We were wary of the sci-fi aspect too, very worried when we embarked on the story. It seemed to have written itself though, so we were happy with it. Wonderful to hear you enjoyed it ::grins::
Review By [Mezek] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Kirallie
Review:
When you say the end did you mean the end of the story? Cause it's not listed as complete.

Good work, not as good as your vampire and werewolf stuff though.
Comments from author:
Yeah, end of the story *nods*

Oops on not changing the designation.

We're thinking on a Vamp/Werewolf story ::grins:: We also are writing a short Vamp/human Xmas one.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [3 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from ursamajor
Review:
This comes a bit late. I was sad that the story ended but better that than never be finished. I've read so many stories that are too long and even more stories that are never going to be finished. After reading couple unfinished stories I'm mad...

I really liked the scifi side of this story and strongly urge you to write more scifi stories. At first I tried to place you story in other scifi worlds like Babylon5. Quickly I noticed that you had created your own world and that's ok. Creating your own world gives you more freedom and in this case it was even logical and interesting.

Waiting for more!
Comments from author:
No such thing as late ::grins::

Wonderful to hear you enjoyed this. I agree, nothing is more maddening than unfinished stories. You won't find that here, guaranteed. I always have a draft of the whole thing before I start posting *nods*

We probably drew a little from all those sci fi worlds/shows and are relieved the world building worked. I think we showed just enough to let the reader fill the rest in and make it better, lol

Thanks a bunch!
Review By [ursamajor] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Riyirowe
Review:
Fantastic! I love the ending, even though I hate to see it be over. And I would love more AUs, especially sci-fi ones. They are too rare. Thanks again for a lovely story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your lovely review ::grins::

We're working on a Spike/Sam fic next, but after that, I think we'll try another Sci Fi.
Review By [Riyirowe] • Date [8 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Riyirowe
Review:
This story is one of my new favorite AUs! I love the whole idea of it, and you are writing the boys so well. And also? It is hotter than hot! Thanks so much, and I will wait for more holding my breath! (that means you can't take very long, you know, or else I could pass out)
Comments from author:
Thanks a bunch, very pleased you like the story - I co-write this with Charlotte. We only have one long chapter more to go, and we'll get it up soon, promise.

*Hugs*
Review By [Riyirowe] • Date [4 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from DoctorAddicted
Review:
"They'd make it through this, then figure out their own issues."
Ha, as if they'd get so lucky. These issues are more likely to kick them in the butt right in the middle of a dangerous situation, you just wait and see, Cpt. Dean Winchester...
This was an amazing chapter. Heartbreaking and steamy hot, exciting and angsty all at once.
Am very much looking forward to the next one!
Comments from author:
Lol, luck does not seem to be shining down on them, huh? Poor Capt. Winchester.

Glad you liked it. We'll probably be able to get the next one up by the end of the weekend. *Hugs*
Review By [DoctorAddicted] • Date [29 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Kirallie
Review:
Hopefull they'll get the chance to sit down and really talk things through one day. Neat how Dean's been using Sam's B'day all these years without remembering why he chose those numbers.
Comments from author:
Hope floats eternal That bday thing worked out well, glad you liked it.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from nomadbeth
Review:
Ah, hawt and tension and absence of all other life. The Wincest boys have all the fun. Seriously, well written so far!
Comments from author:
Wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story ::grins::
Review By [nomadbeth] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Kirallie
Review:
So being stuck in an elevator saved their lives? Are there no other survivors? Is the ship they came in still there? Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Reason they survived will be clarified later, but Sam said they're all dead. That ship dropped them off, so it isn't there anymore. Thanks!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [24 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Kirallie
Review:
Dean has to let Sam in!! Will Sam remember what he did while drunk?
Comments from author:
Heee, drunken Sam is fun. Yeah, he remembers ::grins::
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [22 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from MinaLynn
Review:
very powerful chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks a bunch :)
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DoctorAddicted
Review:
He, now we might juts have some murderous alien plants on our hands to make things even more interesting - those dead scientists didn't wear anything red by any chance, did they *g*

The dynamic between Sam and Dean in this story is amazingly in character - the way they both push and push until their nearly irrevocably broken and then they might, just might be able to take a step in the right direction. It's heartbreaking to witness but of course also really great :)
Comments from author:
Red like red shirts of Star Trek? Heeee!

Yeah the plot starts to thicken ::grins::

Glad you're finding the boys in character despite the AU setting, we always try to strive toward that. This one is definitely an emotional rollercoaster type story. Next bit is up!

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Review By [DoctorAddicted] • Date [18 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Kirallie
Review:
Good work!! Poor Sam having to feel the attacks and their deaths!!1 Is it the vines? WHy does Dean's memories seem familair to Sam? He's not his brother is he?
Comments from author:
Thanks a bunch. Yeah, poor Sammy! Oooh good guess :) Next part is up!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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