This story.... I don't even have words. It was weird, odd, strange, freaky, occasionally stupid, and it switched tenses (present, past) constantly. That said, it made fun of every Dawn-Get-Kidnapped story out there, and it WAS funny, which I believe balances it out. 6 out of 10, and I'm being modest with the points.
Review By [SisterD] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Can this please turn into an all out brawl with various Marvel characters in it? Like the ones deadpool impersanates in various comics? Will Buffy make an apperance and gut a few demons in front of deadpool????
Comments from author:
Unlikely but there will be a sequal. You'll have to wait for the story on that.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Great story so far. I did spot something that read like an error:
Deadpool aims the throwing stars pulling back before he feels a tapping on his shoulder.
“Look, I’ll take care of the little girl like you want…” he turns his head around just in time to feel the punch slam into his face, his nose breaking quite easily as his head snaps back, leaving him unconscious.
“Baby, I haven’t been a little girl in a long time, and that should show you for having a target tattooed on your head. WHO does that…?”
In order for this to make sense I think you meant to write Bullseye in the first sentence(unless Deadpool not only switched sides but also costumes)
Comments from author:
Absolutely correct, thanks for pointing that out.
Review By [SamJames] • Date [14 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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