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Review of chapter "26" from Vilkath
Review:
I know the author seems very defensive in their responses to this chapter but I have to go WTH? Big dialog about being faithful to Xander if they got married and then she went got naked and sweaty with Luke?

Plus just a day or two ago was talking about how hot Leia was but she wouldn't do anything because it would be incest for Jaina and any sex would have to include them all. Yet she jumps into bed with Luke... on two fronts she betrayed trust and her own morals.

Then she smiles and laughs about how they had just better accept what she did because Luke was feeling really bad.... To me it killed her character.

Everything Danni worked towards in this story so far about growing above her heritage seemed lost in this scene. She went back to a empty headed bimbo who can't see sex as something important again. It wouldn't matter so much if there weren't pages of words spent in this story already about how much she would have to be faithful to Xander and Jaina if she stayed married to them.

It would be one thing if she talked it with her lovers and they agreed. Instead Danni just goes behind both their backs and sleeps with an emotionally crippled boy. Frankly taking such advantage of a person would be considered rape in many views, especially if it was a girl instead of a boy.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [9 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 73" from Grovtech
Review:
I serious thought you were going to have Dawn and Lexa taking their flight tests in the middle of the invasion. Truthfully I'm a little disappointed, but any hope that Dawn will overcome her disability is hopeless.

Of all of your changes to canon that perhaps bugs me the worst even if I enjoy reading this. I do wonder at how the hellmouth is going to, well, hell, with the majority of the defenders gone. Glory might be stymied, but she'll won't go into obscurity gently. There is also the power vacuum that will no doubt draw bad guys like honey.

That leave Faith who I think is either in a coma or jail at this point and Giles. Is this pre-Tara and Anya?

Grover
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [1 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from raxadian
Review:
Honestly, was it really needed to have Buffy , Dawn and Willow in this? Seems kinda pointless.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [7 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from raxadian
Review:
A vampire? In Star trek? How original!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 73" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 73" from moringstar
Review:
Nice to have you back with us. Can't wait to see what comes next in your Star Wars flic. Hope you find the time to update your harry potter flics. Keep up the hard work. :)
Review By [moringstar] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 73" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 73" from Rob
Review:
Great to see more of this.
Review By [Rob] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 72" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the nice work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 72" from Bobboky
Review:
nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 72" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
Thank God! I haven't read a good story for the the entire week until now. Update soon.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 71 (Vers. 1.1. 02-09-14)" from Oddshot
Review:
I am loving your Knight away & Knight No More series and I so hope your Muse is encouraging you to write more of this series so you will update it soon .

I so need to know what going to happen in these stories.

Yours Oddshot
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [1 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 71 (Vers. 1.1. 02-09-14)" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Hi Hatten....I hope you are still well... I didn't hear from you in a while and your old email address seems to be invalid. If you
still follow the reviews here, it would be nice to drop me a mail.

Bye,
Hawklan
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 71 (Vers. 1.1. 02-09-14)" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapter, thanks!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 71 (Vers. 1.1. 02-09-14)" from grd
Review:
The last part was a complete surprise and sadly shows why Xan's Enterprise will never meet her namesake. Xan and Q responsible for them is a great shock.
Review By [grd] • Date [29 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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