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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Great story! Thank you! :)
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LeaFairy
Wow, this was completely amazing! I love Mommy!Anita! Especially with Xander, Cordy, Faith, Oz and Dawn as her kids... I actually feel somewhat sorry for her :)

Also great twist with Dawn actually surviving and becoming one of Anita's kids. I was sad when I thought she was going to die to save Faith and Xander. But hey, all happy at the end. Yay! Lol.

Fantastic job on who's daddy is who's... I love that Jean-Claude was Dawn's and that Xander and Cordy are brother/sister and are son/daughter to Raphael.

Fun little story! Thanks for writing!!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)

I like my happy endings! Most of the time.

That was probably the oddest part, trying to figure out whose was whose.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Saw this was nom for best anita blake and wasn't sure what to think about it...Anita as a mom always freaks me out, as does baby scoobies. But this worked. I *really* liked it and who the fathers were for each kid.

Very cool story :)

Good luck with the COAs!
Comments from author:
Well, I wasn't really sure what to think about it while I was writing it, so that's understandable. Anita as a mother kind of terrifies me, but I like de-aging people, and I thought it be interesting, so I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PrincessTai
>>Technically, it wasn’t a lie. Dead was fine, if not exactly the same state of being.
Oh, goodness, Dawn.

I can't quite remember who Raphael is. Is he the rat? And aww, Xander and Cordy, as sibs! :-D

>>.Don’t be mad. Anger had always been Anita’s go-to emotion but having kids (inheriting them, whatever) had taught her that everything couldn’t be about anger all the time.
FINALLY! *coughs* That's a welcomed relief :-D

Hee, Leather, Chuck Taylors, and Blue Hair, oh my! *bwg* Love it. And Cordelia, some things ... Of course not, but still it's good to see as much :-D

I like that ending. I really and truly did.
Comments from author:
She's at that line, here.

He's the rat king.

The anger's hard to write around the shmoop.

They're interesting kids. And some things never change.

Some people said it felt rushed but that's the one it demanded.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [23 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
I enjoyed this a lot- I loved your portrayal of Dawnie near the beginning. I'm sad that you hopped to the epilogue so soon, because I would very much have liked to see more of the kids when they were younger. This story was 90% set up and 10% epilogue, with nothing in the middle- but it was enjoyable anyway.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slmncpm
this is a very good story and i would love seeing more. *smiles* if you like doing more.
Comments from author:
Probably no more for this one. I don't think. Crap, do you see bunnies? I see bunnies...
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [16 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Zith
This is great, as always.
I don't know if you noticed, but you referred to Asher's former human servant as Judith in chapter four. Judith is Anita's stepmom. Asher's human servant was named Julianna.
Thanks for being so prolific and doing it so well.
Comments from author:
Someone else pointed that out. *facepalm* I'm horrible with names, especially when the character doesn't get a lot, or in these two characters' cases, any, face time.
Glad you enjoy it.
Review By [Zith] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Great writing of a complicated crossover.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have a hard time writing in the Anita 'verse. She's just so cranky and everything's just so complicated.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Caliadragon
I'm so glad that you decided to post each version of this challenge. I loved your take on Anita as a Mommy.

Comments from author:
Well, I couldn't help myself. It was all written and stuff. I figured I might as well post it.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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