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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
Hmm promising start but that's all it is for now. When are you making this promising start to a full story.

I really would love to read more. Well got it on tracking so when you decide it's worthy to write a full story. I won't miss it.

Please try
Comments from author:
Just started working on my stories again. Did think about this one recently though. So much has been revealed in the Naruto storyline since I worked on this so my plot line is going to have to change a bit, thankfully not too much. I will try to get to this soon, but knowing my history on getting to my stories it might take awhile.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from randyzoopurple
Review:
yes i can already tell this going to be a great story
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [18 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from aidensmom
Review:
I curious to see where this goes. Write more soon!
Comments from author:
I've actually had this story in my mind a lot lately so hopefully I'll update it soon. ^_^
Review By [aidensmom] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sabrielemrys
Review:
i just recently stumbled upon your story, and i must say intrigued. the date of when you published it frightens me. SO DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY PLEASE!! OR I'LL SEND NARUTO TO SCREAM "BELIEVE IT!" IN YOUR EAR OVER AND OVER!!

so yeah...pllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssseeeeeeeeee update!! *begs*
Comments from author:
It has been awhile since I wrote this isn't it? I'm working on finishing one of my other stories... I haven't updated a lot of my stories in awhile. I'll try to work on this soon. ^_^;;
Review By [sabrielemrys] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AlphaBeta
Review:
I would love to see more of this. And also if possible, at least read the manga, there has been some great fights since then.
Comments from author:
^_^ I'm going to try to work some more on my stories. I want to finish some of them. I know I hate it when stories I like aren't updated and I hate doing it to others. I have got some more of the manga now to read, I just haven't yet. I just need to review some information before I write more of this. I'm glad you like it so far!
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a good story, so please stop being an evil author.
Comments from author:
I am evil aren't I? I have the next chapter planned out but I need to verify some Naruto information first which I'm too lazy to print out. I haven't read Naruto in ages and I want this to be as canon as possible.
I also just got a new computer because I accidentally fried my old one. Darn static! I just hope my old HD is readable so I don't have to restart any chapters from scratch.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hecatonchires
Review:
nice intro
Comments from author:
Thanks. ^-^
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [4 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Linnie
Review:
This is good but I have a question.

Is Minato or Naruto that's threatening her? Coz you've only given the fact the ninja is blonde.
Comments from author:
Ah ha! I did that deliberately. I'm glad you caught it! I should work some more on this story. It'll be revealed in the next chapter.~~~
Review By [Linnie] • Date [11 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
Interesting.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
sounds interesting so far! Will buffy become a ninja of the leaf? It would be interesting to see their interactions (or a Buffy versions tsunde show down). Will anko be in this?
Comments from author:
^-^ I don't want to give too much away. Buffy will probably run into Tsunade, but I'm not sure about Anko. I've got the overall plot planned out but some details are still to be decided.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nightscream
Review:
good so far. I like the fact that she dosen't automatically "Magically" speak the language. That adds a bit of...Omph to the fic.
Comments from author:
Thankies! They're speaking Japanese, of course Buffy wouldn't understand them. Go Omph!
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kittysgotclaws
Review:
wow. I'm happy I found this. there are simply too few Buffy-Naruto stories out there, so I really hope you'll continue this;)
Comments from author:
Thanks! I've never written Naruto fanfics, so I hope you'll continue to like it. ^-^
Review By [Kittysgotclaws] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mayrose
Review:
Okay liking this story so far.
I've read a lot of iffy cross's with Naruto, but this one seems like a good one so far.
I hope you continue it. :)

~Mayrose
Comments from author:
Thanks!
I've actually got this whole story planned out in my head so hopefully it'll turn out not too iffy. I'm afraid I'm not too knowledgeable of where I'm putting this, so please bear with it. ^-^
Review By [Mayrose] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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