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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Ah c'mon now! It's just gettin interesting! More please!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AndreaMaine
Review:
Ok it's been some time since you last updated, I wonder if you plan to continue this story? I like it and want to see how it ends.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from PsychoWing
Review:
Interesting story. I like the way you're shifting between the two time periods.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [4 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LordSia
Review:
Oh, nice. Too disjointed for my taste though, it's written Eragon-style - more like a movie script than a litterary work. Still, pretty nice, and with the "Man vs Evil" angle that people so often skip in favour of Super-Xavier.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [14 Jan 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice story so far and I always like Faith and Xander together. Just can't help myself with
liking this pairing.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [19 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
pretty cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great writing but a little distracting with how you flick back and forward on the timeline.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Another nice read. Hope to see the next update soon!
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LostSpartan
Review:
This was a very well-written chapter, and I have to agree that the time shifting is good - looking forward to the meeting in the Data Centre (I won't give away anything re the game, but Xander might just make a wrong assumption...). And I LOVE the line at the end - it sums up the game beautifully!

Oh, and just a little nitpick re the ending of this chapter - the sensor unit came from a crashed drone fighter, not a Warthog (the shell of the fighter can still be seen stuck in the statue).
Comments from author:
Yeah, that realisation hit me today when I was playing through the game on Legendary today (Lost Highway and I'm done!!!) Still, I'll leave it and just say it was the nav from the Warthog, that kinda makes more sense than the drone's sensor from the game anyways :S
Review By [LostSpartan] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Like it, like it, like it! Keep up the good work and update soon please!
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great writing with an interesting method of developing Xander. Well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lostandcantbefound
Review:
Played the game. Loved it.
Read your story. Love it
Review By [Lostandcantbefound] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from MerKat
Review:
Cool.
Review By [MerKat] • Date [16 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written switch on the standard HALO story where Xander is a Spartan. Not too sure about the end where Xander turns up in the HALO reality. Will eagerly await and see, great teaser, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from LostSpartan
Review:
I was wondering who'd take the first shot at ODST - and it does seem like a good start. A little light on the Sunnydale side, but I imagine most of the action will be taking place in 2552, anyway...

Well done for a startoff - hope to see more...
Comments from author:
Expect to see a 50/50 split between the Sunnydale and New Momabasa narratives. Time skipping is fun! And I've watched enough episodes of Lost to know how to do it right I think :P
Review By [LostSpartan] • Date [16 Oct 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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