Very cool! And i like Dana already. And i'll go with AllenPit on this one. The Scoobs are idiots. Yep, they didn't even apologize to her. Two in particular, since they're the ones who actually know about why Firstie was actually able to act. Hell, Anya even had the guts to say Buffy was "lucky". And Xander had the guts to actually complain, even though he did it in a sarcastic manner. "I'm trying to see your point, but it must be a little too much on the left because i can't see it." 'One-who-sees' my butt. He only ever saw what he wanted to see. Proof, the "You can't kill her!" he told Buffy when she spoke about slaying Anya, which she was entitled to as part of her calling. Why, does that mean she only has a right to kill the people she loves and he doesn't?

Well, i'm starting to ramble so i'll stop here... anyway, i really can't wait for the next chapter.

excellent start! Can't wait to read more.

I am definitely intrigued. The title of the story caught my attention because this is one of my favorite scenes for an author to redress. Dana is a very interesting character. I can't wait to see what you do with this. :)

This is awesome so far! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. Keep up the good work!

So... Spike followed Buffy? Giles & the scoobs did look for her, but not 'til the next morning. Always wondered what the hell they would have said if they'd found her, though. Looked really guilty in that scene, like they'd started to realize what they'd done to her. Never could figure how she could just go back, and nobody said anything about the incident ever again.