Hey, I really enjoy your story. I like hwere you were going with the plot; I think it is an interesting take on the Buffy parentage theme.
But one thing I can't get over is your timeline...I mean, you never said it was going to be AU for Buffy fifth season. And at that point in the series there was no Cordelia or Jenny. You completely lost Dawn and Anya. And even Tara and Spike are missing.
It is like you kept the Scoobies in the second season, just upped there ages and some of their experiences.
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
I really like your story so far and I hope you update it soon. It seems to have a great start and I am very interested to see what you have in store for this story. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.
Smile, Macala A.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [18 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I can't wait to read more. I am a little confused though, is Dawn not around? Is the time line the same other than her absence? How old is Buffy at this time, is she a college student?
Review By [Kristi] • Date [18 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Jenny still alive and Cordy still around, so this is AU for the Buffyverse. Could still be canon Potterverse. An interesting start, I will be looking forward to more.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [16 Oct 09] • Not Rated