Review of chapter "The Value of Zero" from Mcspender
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Bravo!!Excellent ending to this chapter =). And I really believe that Spike can kill the Hal... The Ring AI, he's able to do a looot of things =). Cool fic, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
It's time for a Jihad! Purge the infidel hordes! Spike is the Paladin purging the unclean god from the Ringworld. It's time for a crusade.
I do believe Spike as an enlightened vampire with a boosted IQ and pissed to boot is more than a match for an uppty machine that thinks it's a god. Of course, Ouroboros has the blended soul of Willow and Vamp-Willow and all the magic in the galaxy, so it's gonna get ugly.
More soon.
Thanks for the review!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Value of Zero" from robertlisle
Review:
An interesting end to a strange and unusual story. Are you done with this series or is there more to the story? Either way, great job.
Comments from author:
This is part two of the trilogy. That's why I left It as a cliffhanger.
Thanks for the review!
Review By [robertlisle] • Date [1 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Janus Effect" from Mcspender
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Whoa, that was epic!. And somehow the last line, adds more epic sense =). Cool chapter, see ya!!
Comments from author:
No power in the universe is greater than the cuteness of a drooling baby! : )
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Mirror Effect II" from PATM
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How does a souless monster gain redemption? That version of Willow died an innocent and has nothing to do with her killer. Good chapter though and Spikes turning is a nice take on Drac's encounter with Buffy. I am very interested on Willow and babe Buffy's new situation. Nice one.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I was thinking it was about time Spike got a taste. How does a souless monster gain redemption? The same way as everyone else does. All will be revealed soon .
Review of chapter "The Rein of Darkness" from Mcspender
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Baby Buffy is cute =)!. So, the slayers are seeing dead unicorns everywhere... interesting; besides, those pesky invisible pink unicorns are not feeling too powerful now =P. And Bad ass Willow is Bad ass!!!. Janus is gonna be used to give Dawn her soul??. Interesting, veryyy interesting. Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Hey, somebody is getting a soul for christmas. : )
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [19 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
You finally got to see Buffy naked? Oh my buffalo wings! Willow has a taste for the off kilter doesn't she. The updates were fun to read Bad Willow is awesome 'dreaming of evil' indeed! The Ring world mention kept the other story alive. Well done.
Comments from author:
It's nice to see Xander achieve one of his life's dreams. However, I don't think his dream of seeing Buffy in the buff included changing her diapers. : )
Review of chapter "Broken Symmetry" from Mcspender
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So, the Halo...Eeeerhm, The Ring World is starting to make it's mark around the magic force of our planet. And this "Hey everybody, there’s a bunch of dead unicorns outside." really cracked me up =). Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
That line never fails..cuz it raises sooo many questions. : )
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Mirror Effect I" from Mcspender
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So Dawn and Buffy are sharing, not only DNA, they're sharing a soul too. Talk about a close family =P. Cool fight scene with Vamp Willow, she's kidna scary and waay strong. Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I had a lot of people wondering about Dawn's soul. You'll see where I'm going with this soon. I've always felt that Vamp Willow never got enough quality violence time. : )
See Ya!!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Willow Does a Spell" from Mcspender
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Dawn not having a soul??? How's that even posible???. Adding vamp Willow in the mix, is gonna be quite a mess. Cool!!!. See ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Last time I checked, it takes a power higher than just a mere monk to create a Human soul.
Besides, Dawn is just a construct to house mystic forces. A soul represents a long term transcendent investment by a Higher Power. Since when does a mere construct need a soul?
Dawn was orginally intended as a temporary solution for a temporary problem. I really don't think the monks thought things through.
The presistance of Dawn is a real problem.
Look on the brightside, the Ringworld dosen't have a soul either, yet.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Girls of Summer" from Mcspender
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And Dawn enters the exclusive club of people who names their personal weapons... seriously Cathy ;) :P ???. Nice to see Dawn having self defense skills, at least she can protect her family.
See ya!!.
Comments from author:
I think she finally figured out that Buffy won't be around all the time to protect her.
Now if only she could contact planned parenthood. : )
See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Interesting story but by now the characters have very little visceral response from me, mirrors, copies and quantum whatzits creating thingamajigs from whozits. wheew! Larry Niven is one of the coolest fantasy people around so I'm helpless before this spinoff and its intrinsic backstory.
Comments from author:
Funny I was thinking the same thing myself. I think it's time to add some meat to the bones.
PS: FYI, this story is s sequel to "Ring in the Sky." I think that should fill in the backstory.