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Review of chapter "Conversations with Scooby People" from garrycooper
Review:
Well done!!! Please write more, this story needs to be finished when you have a chance.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [15 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations with Scooby People" from Iamthewalrus
Review:
This is an awesome story, the only thing that could make it better would be if someone ends up riding a T-rex into battle. And mammoths. Mammoths are essential.
Comments from author:
I really need to update this, especially since there isn't much left. I've got some time next week that I'll devote to the next chapter.

But yes, Buffy will be riding a T-Rex. Because that is awesome.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Iamthewalrus] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations with Scooby People" from katimaviklindzy
Review:
Love this story, I've actually been looking for a copy of the book from a used bookstore for a while now because I became so interested from this story. I hope there will be an update soon.
Comments from author:
I think it's great that you're going to read the book. While some of the science is a bit dated, the story is great, better than the movie, I think. You might want to pick up the sequel as well: the Lost World.

I'm working on the next segment, but it's been difficult to keep from throwing in deus ex machina after deus ex machina. I hope to have it soon, but no promises.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [katimaviklindzy] • Date [28 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations with Scooby People" from (Recent Donor)Specter
Review:
If you could finish this that would be awesome
Comments from author:
I've got the next chapter open on my computer right now. I had to take a break for a while to get back into the swing of things. I'll update soon.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Specter] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conversations with Scooby People" from meteoricshipyards
Review:
They have a plan. They had 4 weeks to implement it. Glory has shown up.

WHATS HAPPENING?

(I wouldn't care if it wasn't a good story).

Tom A.
(mumble evil cliffie mumble)
Comments from author:
I'm getting there, I'm getting there. I really AM working on this story. It's just not quite done. Almost, almost.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [meteoricshipyards] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Another bloody chase scene...and dinosaurs" from meteoricshipyards
Review:
I love it....
"They've escaped"
One week later
...

I laughed when I read that. There are quite a few good laughs in this story.

I do notice that I'm starting to run out of chapters. It says incomplete. I hope more are on the way.

Questions that I hope will get answered in the story:
Will Lex do anything about noticing Buffy's strength? Will she see Buffy taking out raptors with a sword?
Will Ethan really get away with it? Can Buffy's lawyers find some way to avoid having to pay _him_ compensation?

My vision for the climax - Glory, wounded from a raptor attack that she overcame, is about to get Dawn when she's suddenly eaten by a Tyrannosaurus.

Thanks for the story. A lot of fun. Looking forward to the rest.

Tom A.
Comments from author:
I believe Lex has made her last major appearance for the story. There might be something more with her a little on with Ralphie, but not too much. She won't be seeing any raptor slayage.

As for Ethan, he's a volunteer. And volunteers give their services for free, or sometimes doughnuts. Ergo, no compensation beyond the occasional sugary confection.

There will be a T-Rex involved. I mean, hey, it's a Jurassic Park story and the T-Rex hasn't shown up yet. Soon, soon it will be revealed.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [meteoricshipyards] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations with Scooby People" from Bluejello
Review:
So, review the second!
Now that I've read all that you've posted... wow. I love how you've handled Buffy and her taking over InGen, very true to her character.
And special props for what you've done with Lindsey. His switching over, and understanding of how to work with the Scooby's - very nice!
And now, what must I bribe your muse with in order to get more of this wonderful story?
Comments from author:
I did try to stay in character. It wasn't easy all the time, but it was one of my goals to see how the characters, as they were during season 5, reacted to a situation very much out of their realm of experience.

Lindsey is one of my favorite characters that I just don't use enough. He's dynamic and is forced to struggle with himself without turning into angst-man.

I'm working on it now. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trouble Waiting to Happen" from Bluejello
Review:
I'm less than a third of the way through, but I just wanted to let you know that I love what you've done so far.
And the bit with Ethan? Is awesome. Nice to know I'm not the only one who recognized him!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I did spot him when I rewatched the movies. I had to use him after that.

I know this story has been on the back burner for far too long. I'm going to write the rest before I post any more, though, because that will force me to get my butt in gear. It's almost done, really, only five or six more chapters to go. I think I'll work on that right away.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations with Scooby People" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I love it that Lindsey GETS the "Return of the Jedi" reference Xander makes (I knew there was a cute geek hidden under all that smooth, lawyerly, occasionally buttoned-down semi-evilness!).
Comments from author:
Yeah, I like Lindsey and I just think there's more to him than lawyerness, an evil hand and a guitar. It just seemed to make sense.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations with Scooby People" from draconis
Review:
Great last few action-packed chapters.

Good thing Willow didn't have to ride one of those horses.

And of course, NEVER mix magic horses with Dino genes...that would be bad.
Comments from author:
That last part is never going to happen.


Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [draconis] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conversations with Scooby People" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chaos and Mysticism" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Loved Buffy throwing Lindsey a la Wolverine in the 'power-ball' maneuver, especially!
Comments from author:
Ah, the old "Fast Ball Special" move. Yeah, I really wasn't sure how to get Lindsey passed Glory, and this is what I came up with. I think it worked.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chaos and Mysticism" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Also thank you for remembering elementary physics. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Hey, can't ignore them all the time.

I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for reading!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [14 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chaos and Mysticism" from (Current Donor)thetwitmachine
Review:
great ending to this chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks, it's actually something that I planned out a while back and I'm just now getting to it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [(Current Donor)thetwitmachine] • Date [14 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chaos and Mysticism" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Oh that looks like a long way down!
Comments from author:
Yep, it is.


Thanks for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [14 May 10] • Not Rated
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