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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from starshinedown
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Oh, really like the idea of this, and I'm sad to see it's been so long since an update. Thank you for this little bit of story, at least!
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from LeaFairy
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Loved the update! Your more mature and take charge Dawn is very much made of awesome and I loved all the details of them hiding the evidence of Buffy's death... Always did wonder what they did with all the bodies. Makes lots of sense.

I am curious as to how everyone is going to react to Dawn's story though. Will they believe her? And if they do, will they let her go with Castiel when he finally comes? Especially Spike.

Anyways, thanks for the incredible chapter! I hope to read more soon!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AllenPitt
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Always did wonder what happened to all the bodies (Ben's especially) not to mention other cleanup issues like moving Buffy's body etc.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Ouch. reading about the aftermath of her death is certainly nooo picnic! but good chapter and I am *so* excited for this story, you have no idea!
Comments from author:
I'm hoping to continue it very soon. I've got more than a few ideas, now I just have to find ways to link them all together.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [4 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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He ripped a whole in the world and allowed a world overrun with demons to pore through. Demons, far worse in many ways, than his own creations came through the rips. They laid waste to large parts of the world. These beings, balancers that they were, that had been actively working against me, now worked with me to plug the holes.

---I think you meant ‘ripped a *hole*

They became the first Earth witches and they protected their villages, passing the knowledge on to those around them.”-AWESOME. I think in the SPN/BTVS-verse that this is how the earth witches get their powers. I’ve been fleshing out areas of thought on this in my own SPN crossover

They suppressed the mind, left the strength, the demon’s skill for war, and it’s ability to sense its brethren behind.-------- I LOVE how you describe this.

He had thought it was a falsity, a pleasant myth to help them sleep at night but listening to his Father talk, he found it might not be so far from the truth. His emotions were bright and harsh, a thing of beauty.----very cool description

The Key story was well-written and concise. Nice!

The Key was named Dawn. Lucifer was God's Morning Star. Morning … Dawn, anyone getting this?---Niiiice.

WOW Freaking awesome chapter!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much, hun. I've gone back through and found some other silly mistakes. *blushes* I can't believe I didn't catch some of those given how many times I read through before posting.

Your awesome comments always brighten my day. :) Thanks.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [4 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)vladt
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very interesting beginning. excellent read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [1 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Kirallie
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Poor Dawn!!! So what season of SPN will this be? Feels like it's earlier than Cas showing up in the show. Liked his interaction with God but feel sorry for him having so much weight put on his shoulders. Keep up the great work!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [1 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Kirallie
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Poor Dawn!!! So what season of SPN will this be? Feels like it's earlier than Cas showing up in the show. Liked his interaction with God but feel sorry for him having so much weight put on his shoulders. Keep up the great work!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [1 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Chaos
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I was just about to tell you how much I loved the subtle but clear connection between the meaning of Lucifer's name and Dawn, and then I saw the clarifying AN at the end. I felt so brilliant for connecting the dots and then you had to go and clarify it! I'm no longer feeling so special. :D

Fantastic story. I'm still in the process of reading it, I just wanted to drop you a quick line about the brilliant connection you made between the names.
Comments from author:
Sorry to ruin your brilliance, hun. :)
Review By [Chaos] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from fatewalker
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I am verily entertained! I like that God made the witches, and the entire mythos you're creating here.
Review By [fatewalker] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Shareece
Review:
this is wonderfully written. I love it. More soon please!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I have about half of the next chapter written out. I just have to find the time to finish it up. It will be the last chapter for a while - until I flesh out the SPN timeline and where I want this story to take place in that timeline.
Review By [Shareece] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LeaFairy
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Hm, very interesting story! I love the idea completely with all the AU history of Dawn (the Key), Castiel, Lucifer, Demons/vampires and God himself. All very intriguing and nicely done.

Anyhoo, I really look forward to reading what happens next-- especially with the Winchesters coming in! Thanks for writing!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from XanderLuvsAll
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Great story so far
Review By [XanderLuvsAll] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from souldriven
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I have to say this crossover is very interesting and I'm loving how you merged the two series together. One question though, how is Spike going to play into all of this? Because there's no way Spike is going to let Dawn wander off with three strange men for 'her protection' without giving a fight. He promised Buffy afterall and with Buffy gone there's no way he'd let Dawn go. That and wow, Methos's artwork for this fic makes me want to see a showdown between Castiel and Spike. I bet it would be all kinds of interesting. Please keep writing this story.
Review By [souldriven] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from banner
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That is an interesting and different view of the Buffy 'verse creation. Lots of possibilities for plot threads. Castiel has a hard road before him: he's been given several important tasks, each of which will need all his strength and intelligence.
Thanks for the update.
Review By [banner] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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