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Review of chapter "In Which the Ship is Redecorated" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Too bad Jayne can't see and 'enjoy' Faith's artwork, as well! Cute touch.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which the Ship is Redecorated" from dreameralways
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Yay! The training begins. Now the question is, what for?
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [1 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which the Ship is Redecorated" from PATM
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Well it's about damn time, Kaylee does have a thing about the engine room. Simon is way too protective to be a Watcher, especially to his sister. How are you going to build from such a
tiresome trait? The hard way then.
Review By [PATM] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which Simon Goes about his Business" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Intriguing -- I hope you're able to continue this and devlop it further.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which Simon Goes about his Business" from Hawkehunt
Review:
The premise is intriguing, although the dialogue does need a little work. Not bad, overall, and I'm interested in seeing where you take it.
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [27 Nov 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Which Simon Freaks Out" from Carojen
Review:
Poor Simon... :P He's going to be driven half mad before he starts believing.
Review By [Carojen] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Which Simon Freaks Out" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I think you have made Simon overreact. He would first start ignoring Faith before blowing a gasket and yelling for Faith to go away. I think you made Simon lose his cool too soon.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which Simon and Mal Argue" from WhiteWolf
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"What in the Hellfire is wrong with the world today?" Mal muttered ....

I think Mal would have said 'Verse like in Universe, instead of the world.

Still liking the story and I'm curious on how it will continue.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which Simon and Mal Argue" from SerpentOfShadows
Review:
So far I like. I will definitely continue reading if you continue writing.
Review By [SerpentOfShadows] • Date [29 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Mirror" from Kethric
Review:
As short as this is, you're probably not going to get a lot of clamor for a continuation. There's not a lot to hook people. Personally, I'm mildly curious, but not enough to demand more, like it seems you're hoping for. My recommendation? Give us a couple solid chapters, maybe 3-5000 words, to see where you're going. You're more likely to get a better idea of how much people like your story. At that point, you probably haven't invested a huge amount of time and effort, and you can assess the reaction more accurately. If you do even a halfway decent job with the story, I guarantee I'll read it. I love Faith, and I love Firefly. To reiterate, I strongly recommend a couple more chapters of about 1500-2500 words apiece to give people a better idea of where you're going before deciding to scrap the story or finish it.
Comments from author:
Thx for the tip I really appreciate your honesty. I've been writting for pleasure for awhile but this is my first time really posting anything for other people to read and I'm not really sure how to go about hooking people...plus you know I could be no good. LOL
Review By [Kethric] • Date [23 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Mirror" from DurhamRed
Review:
Hi, I'd be interested to see where this goes. I liked it. x x
Comments from author:
Thx. so much I really appreciate it!
Review By [DurhamRed] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Mirror" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Nice. Like it.

I'm sure Simon is going to give himself a checkup for any psycho illness and I can already hear River say something cryptic like, 'you have to have faith in Faith.'

I wouldn't mind seeing were this could go. Maybe a few more short stories, how River reacts on it or Shepard Book or Ila.. Ire.. what's her name the Companion, when Simon is seeking advice from others.
Comments from author:
Thx. I'm hoping that this is attention grabbing enough that people will show interest. If so I'll probably turn the concept into a longer fic. If not I still might continue it with a few explanatory short blurbs.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Mirror" from Missingviolet
Review:
yes... huh??
hehe interesting concept! tho i have no idea what's going on except that faith is going to help simon?
will this be a series?!
Comments from author:
The point (well for now anyway) is to make the blurb into a bit of a teaser. If I get enough interest I might turn the concept into a story if not I'll probably add a couple of short chapters explaining things.
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [20 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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