Very interesting place to leave this. It's also kinda weird (in a good way) to read about Harry from other (3rd person) points of view. His take would be cool to read (1st, natch!), but I get the idea you are trying to bring across. I know it's been awhile since you updated, but I hope you finish this.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! PLEASEEEEEEE!

it's really good so far :)

More will be coming! I actually sat down tonight to go over and edit some of the future chapters.

My beta's had some computer trouble (and I've had family trouble) and I'm not sure when they'll be back!

CH9

typical Ken, never liked that b.... anyway and good they offered Michael a job
with the WC *G*

10

nice evening in the club, but the end wasn't so good. You know the old council may have
been right with their handling of rouge slayers...........

Very good story, hope to see more soon.

Formatting and grammar need a bit of work, though.

Harry finally meeting the scobbies, oh and nobody should tell Willow about the tech thing
:)

One of the nice things about TtH is that you can come across books or TV shows that you otherwise wouldn't read or watch. I've really enjoyed this story so far and I'm keen to start reading the Harry Dresden books (and maybe the TV series) as soon as funds permit - that is, after I've caught up with Doctor Who and Torchwood. After all, I need to know what's going on in the Dresdenverse.

Rebecca

PS: please keep Willow in one piece (as opposed to head and body pieces) as I'm rather fond of her, even if she is fictional :).

WOW that was an awesome chapter, I really like Giles in Ripper mode :)

Good chapter but it is rogue slayer not rouge slayer unless she is also really with her foundation.

Man that harsh. Insteresting twist but harsh.

Damn good so far. Please update soon. Please.

Your wish is my command... just give me 10 min?

Refusing to go to Brazil is definitely grounds for a breakup. And hey--Ken could have broken up with her answering machine instead of talking to her directly, after all. So all is good! . But the joke is on Willow if the world really does end because she didn't go. hm...I'm kind of surprised some slayer hasn't had a coin dropped on her by now. Maybe they concentrate on getting wizard types only?

Getting better and better.

Exciting and fun to read! The characters are perfect! Thanks for writing this! Love the Dresden Files!

I'm really liking this fic. So far you've managed to keep everyone in character.

Small point though, on Michael being a weaponsmith for the Watchers. *Charity* is actually the one who made Michael's armor & weapons. And she sparred with him as well.

Do you know, I think you would have been better off if Willow and Kennedy had broken up before the story off stage if you wanted Willow/Harry. I thing the break up was a bit too out of left field. That said, I enjoyed the chapter.