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Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Ansku
Intense... and kind of creepy ;) Good writing :)

Everything I know about Twilight I've learned from your fics and one short movie review a while back. The movie review didn't sound very promising, but your fics just may have convinced me to give it a chance :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from shelimarII
another one definitely. sam as a vamp this time too. i rather like sam in charge. even though dean is my no.1.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. We're going to watch the new Twilight movie and wait for inspiration *nods*
Review By [shelimarII] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Toniboo
yeah u shud definately do anoher but this time having dean as the vamp! i really enjoyed this fic and i hope you do another one!
Comments from author:
Thanks a bunch, and I think we will ::grins:: We already do have one with Dean as the Vamp (Craving), but I think I'd like to write him as the vamp again *nods*
Review By [Toniboo] • Date [25 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Kirallie
Shorter than your others but still as good. Glad that Dean accepted his change so easily once it happened. Sad that he had to hurt some hunters he knew to get away but he didn't hurt them badly did he? Poor Sam going mad and locking himself up to be close to Dean and so he didn't follow him.

Another would be fun. Since you have 2 with Sam as the Cullen then another with Dean as a Cullen to even it out? Will you do another werewolf story at some point?
Comments from author:
This was supposed to be like 3 chapters, lol. It was in response to reader prompts and we were doing short fics for that, but it sort of grew.

I think I'd like to do a Dean as the vamp again too. I also think we'll do werewolf fic at some point *nods* After we see the new Twilight movie, maybe we'll get some inspiration ::grins::
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [24 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from slytherinwithwings
You are like a Winsest smut goddess. I definitely like it with Sam in the position of power in the relationship though. This was way hot. With Dean as vamp, he'd be a little too much holding-back-for-your-own-good. Loved it, all the way through.

Comments from author:
Wincest smut goddesses, huh ::grins:: Glad you liked it. We're thinking on new fic, definitely.

Thanks a bunch!
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [24 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from ArinnaBlack
Yay! Another finished fic ^_^

Should this be the last? I don't know...Have you thought about writing a fic where one of the boys is a Quilette instead of a Cullen? That would be interesting...

Anyways, good job :)
Comments from author:
Yay, lol

We're going to see the new Twilight movie, maybe that will inspire us to go with a Quilette. Anything is possible *nods*

Thank you very much for reading and commenting :)
Review By [ArinnaBlack] • Date [24 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Kirallie
Poor Dean and Sam! At least Alice sort of understood why Dean left. Will Dean drink? If only Jasper was there, he'd be able to tell Sam that Dean was telling the truth when he admitted to starting to love Sam before he dragged him back. Will Dean drink? Please say he stays with them! Could he keep from killing someone if he left?
Comments from author:
Heee, you have the answer to this already *Nods* Thanks for letting us know your thoughts.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [21 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)Anaraine
Good, good. Sam has enough control to back off. *pets Sam*

And I'm just going to curl up around the conversation between Sam & Dean... So very bittersweet, but you can't help loving it anyways. When Sam wants to keep Dean alive, and Dean would rather go out fighting than a caged bird... Dean doesn't believe Sam about the Volturi, but then again, Sam's not doing such a hot job of explaining, either... Might loosen Dean up if you explained a bit, Sam!

GODDAMMIT ROSALIE. YOU SUCK. ARRRGGG. (Okay, I'm slightly happy to see the "As if the likes of you would ever be good enough to be with my brother." because at least that means she's not just doing this to make Sam miserable.) And I'm also really confused about why Alice is continually letting Rosalie get closer to Dean. Because really? She should know better.

Food smut. Mmn.

Bath! Dean being obsessed with hot water! BATH TOGETHER. My coherency is being flushed down the toilet the more I read this. Very sweet. And sexy. And just. YUM.

Also? The continual "throbbing of teeth & blood pounding in his temples". It's shown up enough that you're being consistent with Sam's "must-have-Dean" symptoms, and that's awesome.


Right, I'm going to need a breather before I get to six & seven now.

Quick edits:
Find "knowing the opposit" and change 'opposit' to 'opposite'.
Find "door,Sam released his breaht" and change to "door, Sam released his breath".
Find "eyes still on Dea.," and change to "eyes still on Dean."
Find "him,reaching" and place a space between 'him,' and 'reaching'.
Find "revealing his smi-erection" and change 'smi-' to 'semi'.
Find "him, or..."" and remove the extra quotation mark.
Comments from author:
So glad you enjoyed it! This bit had a lot of ups and down for the boys *nods* Guess it is the same for the entirety of the story. Poor Rosalie... we cast her in the 'bad role' again. Going to have to be sure not to do that in our next Twilight.

Thanks a bunch! *Hugs*
Review By [(Recent Donor)Anaraine] • Date [21 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Recent Donor)Anaraine
Such a moody Sam... Eh, Sam has been relatively creepy recently... Pushing a bit too much, a bit too moody, and stumbling closer to that line labeled "rape". Slightly disturbing, and it shows how much his vampiric instincts are shadowing all of his actions. Oh, and... the Volturi, maybe? That would be shadowing his actions as well, because of course he wants Dean, but then he doesn't want Dean to be hurt, either, but if he's not claimed by the time they show up we have SERIOUS BUSINESS of the bad variety...

Tying Dean up... as much as I personally want to see it, Sam wasn't thinking very clearly when he did it. He's going to creep the fuck out of Dean...

And there we go... Waking up absolutely terrified, even if his body is still reacting to Sam... Dean's progression in, "no, don't want this" to "god, if I get it over with quickly, at least it will be over" to "wantthiswantthis" was also very keenly felt. Awesome job at displaying how his mind is getting steadily more fucked, even though he's clinging to his past beliefs as hard as he can...

Ouch. Dean breakdown... just ouch. He's totally entitled, but it hurts to see him like this, because he's so confused about everything, trying to find something he can hold onto, but Sam has just pulled the rug out from underneath him again... And he doesn't have anyone else he could trust even a little bit, so he ends up clinging to Sam for comfort, too...

And Sam has such a twisted mind view... "I loved you, that's all." WHEN IT'S SO CLEARLY NOT JUST THAT.

Then trying to make Sam feel the same way... even though there is no way for Dean to overpower Sam, so that threat is very, very empty. It's heartbreaking. Just. *pets Dean*

The ending though? That was brilliant. Dean's trying to reestablish a partial trust in Sam, wanting to know if Sam really could stop himself even when brought so close... Wanting to know if it's all been a facade, or if Sam does have a touch of gentleness in him, wasn't just fucking with his mind...

Such a wonderful story... *hugs you both* I'm so very much in love with this. Absolutely delightful.

Quick edits:
Find "D ean'sballs" and change to "Dean's balls".
Find "Dean'sbody" and change to "Dean's body".
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. I was behind on comments, sorry for the delay in responding :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Anaraine] • Date [21 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)Anaraine
[EDIT: for some reason the review was cut off. *grumpy frown* Yay for back buttons.]

[Going back to review the chapters I missed. Because this story is that awesome.]

Mmmn, leave the cuffs on Sam. He looks so pretty tied up, yes? Except Dean's getting kinda twitchy, so maybe that's not such a good idea. Get him all relaxed now, and then tie him up in the future. There will be plenty of time for future smexings...

"Carrot... give the vampire a carrot." This gave me the most bizarre flashback to Bunnicula. Er, but actually, I love it. Just that phase, Dean's quiet scheming for more freedom... YES.

Dean finding out that Sam is utterly obsessed with him, and then his immediate "ohshit, in more trouble than I thought" mentality is wonderful. Sam is so utterly hot right there, describing everything he loves and how he wants to see Dean cum. And his demands, and greediness, even as he holds himself back to a certain point... Just. Lovely.

Haha! DEAN. YOU TOTALLY WANT IT, YOU KNOW YOU DO. Okay, so he's also a bit terrified, and still trying to think about how the hell to get out of this situation, but I love the reluctant want from Dean, how he doesn't want this but he does at the same time. Love. ♥♥♥

The channel surfing was also a very nice touch; Dean wants his life back, and is finding it in unexpected places. Who ever thought that using a tv remote could evoke feelings of normalcy?

Sneaky cheating Sam. You're going to scare Dean off if you go too quickly.

The next bit? I'm just going to write "HOT" because my poor overheated brain can't come up with better descriptions. I'm a melting puddle of goo on the floor, here.

And such a lovely end to the chapter. So cliffhanger-y and final, like Dean's locking himself into a place he won't be able to get out of.

Quick edits:
Find "of it like tha," and change 'tha' to 'that'.
Find "coax the nee and" and change 'nee' to 'need'.
Comments from author:
Reluctant Dean is fun to play with *Nods*

Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Anaraine] • Date [21 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from stasa
Wow! Love this story, reading it gives me the filling of riding a roller coaster:)
Very intense and full of angst, just what I'm in the mood for, so please update soon.
But those boys are stubborn...
Oh, just one tiny thing, nothing major, but short for Rosalie is Rose, not Ros. I know you haven't read the Twilight saga, so I thought why not help if I can :D
Comments from author:
This one does hit the angst kink, lol. The boys are very stubborn *nods*

Ack, really? Damn... now its hard to fix Ros to Rose because we are so far int he story, and we post in more places than one. I'll definitely keep it in mind though for any future cross over fics we do. Thanks for letting us know :)

Hoping to finish this story up by or during the weekend!
Review By [stasa] • Date [15 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from MerKat
Wow! That was a hot chapter. So good.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it :)
Review By [MerKat] • Date [8 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Kirallie
WIll Sam stop this time? Who is coming and why does it worry Sam?
Comments from author:
Hmm... answers are up :P
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [4 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Kirallie
Will Sam say yes? Doesn't Dean realise that even if Sam lets him go, with how much he wants him Dean'll just end up with his very own vampire stalker?
Comments from author:
Oooh vampy stalker, now that is a thought! Bet you're right about that, but not sure Dean is thinking that far ahead.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from chibifae
I sooo need a glass of water after reading that. wow
Comments from author:
LOL, one glass of iced water coming up :P
Review By [chibifae] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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