Review of chapter "Ashes" from RogueAngel
Just a quick review to beg you to come back and update this work. It's so close to the end of the arc, and through I know what happens I wanna know what happens with Amaya there. So please, I hope you do come back and update this.
Review By [RogueAngel
] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from bradsan
oww you are mean. Still no update.
Would you please try to update this really and I mean really good story. I want to know how it ends.
Sooo pretty, pretty please.
Review By [bradsan
] • Date [14 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from Aista
Wow. For a BtVS/Bleach crossover I wasn't expecting such a fantastically written series! You've got so many plot devices in the air it's practically an imbroglio. There's quite a few things I like and only a few I don't. Normally I don't like multiple POV changes within individual chapters, but I can understand why you have to do them and you make it work. Your characterisation is pretty good so far - I wouldn't mind seeing Amaya's zanpakuto explored a bit more but (and correct me if I'm wrong) I'm guessing you've got plans for that later.
Now the good stuff ... probably what struck me right off the bat was the plot. A common problem for writers is redundancy and then couple that with the bane of fanfiction writers - repetition. However, you know when to draw the line and that's probably what I like most about Learning to Live. It's not boring. I'm not having to shovel through paragraphs of content I've already watched or read before. On a side note, I'm also loving the whole Byakuya/Amaya thing. It was probably one of my most favourite developments toward the end of Learning to Breathe. So far I think LtB is the best quality-wise but it's definitely easier to handle a 20K word piece compared to what will probably be an epic length for LtL.
So that's all the critique I have in me today. I hope you decide to continue it but I can understand how real life issues tend to stomp the creative muse into obscurity. Thanks for writing!
Review By [Aista
] • Date [4 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ashes" from oneofjanesisters
Never thought I'd enjoy a Bleach/ Buffy crossover so much. Your blending of both worlds makes sense and the relationships between the characters are interesting and touching. I also love the way you manage to patch up Buffy and Dawn's sisterly bond without making it something forced. Great job and here's hoping that you return to it someday! Thanks for writing great stories!
Review By [oneofjanesisters
] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ashes" from Toniboo
me again, requesting an update. please? i''l' even make it pretty and add a ben and jerry's cookie dough ice cream on top!!!
fingers crossed you'll update soon
Review By [Toniboo
] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from nomanic
Doo dee doo. Waitin' here. For like a year. Please update. So I can celebrate. Dee doo doo.
Review By [nomanic
] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from bradsan
Would you please update this story. I really want to read more.
So please try
Review By [bradsan
] • Date [11 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from AutumnG
I would love to be able to read more of this.
Review By [AutumnG
] • Date [14 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from nightshift
I just was introduced to Bleach--and I am seriously enjoying this story. You have most of the voices very close if not spot on, and the pacing of the story is entertaining and engaging. You made it possible for me to actually like Dawn (something I thought was never going to happen).
Review By [nightshift
] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from Selonianth
When will you continue it?
Review By [Selonianth
] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from fran
I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
Review By [fran
] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from MageOhki
Man, what a cliffhanger to leave us hanging on... I hope this story isn't dead, becasue waiting for the Hill's battle royals... wow. Who will she fight? So many _good_ choices...
Review By [MageOhki
] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from HMaxMarius
Sweet! I got hooked on Bleach back when Cartoon Network first started showing it a couple years after Buffy went off the air. The backstory here is soo familiar and yet so much better because we aren't spending five episodes on Ichigo deciding which way he's going to swing his sword in a single fight... (Bleach was great but a bit heavy on the 'Crack-Fu')
What I'm really loving here though is the Dawn bits! You know the old saying about how if there's a Gun in act one it better go off in act four... well, I'm really anxious to see the explosion Dawnie's setting up... btw... I think it would be good for Dawn to start referring to herself using the false identity that Buffy/Amaya arranged for her... I think it would be a good 'inflexion point' in her self-identity (as you have been setting up in the last couple chapters).
Anywho... am really enjoying and anxiously awaiting more.
Review By [HMaxMarius
] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from HananeELmokkadem
So. I finally watched Bleach. I fucking love it! Of course the first thing I did after Ichigo saved Rukia in Soul society was re-read your fic. AWESOME!!!
Things make so much more sense... *scratches the back of her neck sheepishly*
It's really, really good, this story you wrote.
I have to say though, I love the fact that you paired Buffy and Byakuya together. I like him.
Please update soon because I need to know what happens next.
Review By [HananeELmokkadem
] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes" from CinnamonGrrl
Excellent story! I am so eager to read more :)
Review By [CinnamonGrrl
] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]