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Review of chapter "Appearance" from spacey
Review:
well, holy shit.
Comments from author:
lol
Review By [spacey] • Date [3 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appearance" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Ahhh, Grandpa/Grandson bonding how absolutely adorable.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Now if only my stupid writer's block would go away so I can get the next installment written.....
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Appearance" from stasa
Review:
Love the series, it's a wonderful twist on the supernatural original plot :)
And John scene was hilarious!!! I can just imagine the look on his face. :D
Oh, and I knew Dean would make a perfect uncle.
Hope you continue writing new stores in this verse...
Comments from author:
Thanks! I have a few ideas for future stories for the series, its just a matter of writing them...and coming up with the fics that will come before the ones I have ideas for.... I have finals this week, but after that I'm hoping to get a lot of writing done. *crosses fingers*
Review By [stasa] • Date [6 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appearance" from banner
Review:
I just reread this series, and it still warms my heart. I hope your muse leads you back here.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I hope so, too....I have my finals this week, then a little over a month until the new semester starts; I'm hoping to get some writing done over the break. Hopefully the Muses will cooperate....
Review By [banner] • Date [27 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appearance" from oooo
Review:
*smishes Connor* He makes the whole world cute! :D

I love it. I like that you're addressing how they're working their hunts around a baby, and Connor being a baby-shaped EMF is adorable as well as handy. And John! He melted! John Winchester, badass hunter of evil SOBs, is goo on the floor. Connor wins. :D

Okay, I require more of this baby cuteness, so I'll try to be helpful and hurl ideas at you:

This is just a small thing, but have you considered his milestones? Like, maybe Connor will develop faster than most kids physically and sit up, crawl, walk, etc. a few months or weeks ahead of time? Um, there's lots of potential for just family moments, so you shouldn't feel forced to throw them into hunts all the time. Once in a while, of course, because it's what they do, but there's so much you can do with just Connor doing baby stuff. Add in his origins, and you've got lots of possibilities for how a typical Hallmark moment of crawling or something can go haywire. What?! The baby tugged all the blankets off the bed with Uncle Dean *in* them and now Dean's all cranky 'cause of his rude awakening complete with bruises? ;) That's just a tiny example. I'm sure you can come up with better stuff.

I don't really have any preferences for monsters or eps, except I think around the time of the scarecrow ep in the 6 month marker of Jess' death, so will Connor be six months and will that cause problems with the YED? Does Azazel even know about Connor? How are you going to deal with Sam's dark side stuff while he's playing Daddy? Are you going to follow canon in respect to making the whole hell thing happen so that the angels will appear, etc.? You gotta remember which events led to the angels unless you're going to pull them into things for a whole different reason.

You don't have to answer my questions or anything. It's just me being overly helpful in bringing up points to consider if you haven't already. I need to cut short my babble as I'm being summoned, but if you get stuck for ideas or just want to yammer, send me a message or something. I need this story to keep on truckin'. :D

Also, your summary seems perfectly fine to me. I don't see any need to change it.
Comments from author:
*squee* You're review totally made my day when I got it and after rereading it now, I'd do a happy dance if I wasn't so damn tired, lol.

Thanks so much for the ideas, especially Connor pulling Dean off the bed, lol, I'm totally going to try and fit that one in somewhere!

And you shouldn't offer to be a sounding board unless you really mean it, lol, cos I'm totally gonna take you up on that. I'm pretty sure I know how I'm going to do things with Azazel, at least for the end of S1, but I'm not really sure about things after that. There's also a few things that happen in S1 that I need to figure out as well.

Thanks again for the wonderful review! I'll try and get the next part up soon, but I haven't had a chance to work on it yet as I've been extremely busy with school work and haven't been getting much sleep this past week.

~ Kyra
Review By [oooo] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appearance" from banner
Review:
I always liked John - but you really are going to be making some major changes. This is a *great* idea.
Comments from author:
Thanks! There are definitely major changes coming; John is just the beginning....
Review By [banner] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appearance" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
GREAT! Loved it- love how you write little things from Connor's POV...like how he thought John was boring and Uncle Dean wasn't...Lol!

You should have the boys mistaken as a gay couple that adopted...maybe during the episode where they have flashbacks to childhood...afterall the kid makes an assumption that they are gay... maybe John was picking up some food which is why he wasn't there...

Maybe we could see more of Missouri... or at least here more from her... I hope John doesn't die in season 2... maybe he is injured worse than Dean but John is a fighter... It would be funny to see interaction between John and Ellen...and there is also Adam to consider... Afterall Connor would immediatly know that Adam was a ghoul...(and in season 4 Connor could punch people since he'd be about 3 or 4)...I could also see Cas or Uriel calling Connor 'The Destroyer'...

MORE PLEASE! Though feel free to work on EOSD...I miss that one...
Comments from author:
I'm glad you lived it! The little part from Connor's POV wasn't even intended, it just kinda slipped in there, lol.

I'll definitely have them mistaken for a gay couple at some point....I almost wrote the Bugs ep specifically for that reason, but then decided I didn't want to try and rewrite the ep with Connor in it.

Not sure how much we'll see Missouri after this. I want to write the Sam/John conversation, so she'll probably be in the next part, but after that I'm not really sure. What happens with John is a secret for now....mostly cos I'm not sure exactly what's gonna happen, lol. Ellen, Jo and Ash should all make appearances, though I'm not sure if I'll use the Adam storyline... As for Cas and Uriel...I'm definitely going to try and fit them in, but I'm not really sure how I'm going to do it. With some of the changes I plan on making, certain events won't happen...events that HAD to happen for the apocalypse to start... But I'll see what I can do about getting at least Cas to make an appearance....

There will definitely be more, promise! And it has been a while since I workedon EOSD, hasn't it? I'll see what I can do, but I make no promises....*looks at the beginning of this paragraph* Well, at least not where EOSD is concerned, lol.

Thanks so much for the review!!!

~ Kyra
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Appearance" from (Past Donor)Kiara
Review:
I love this series- it's so cute!
Would hate to be Sam right now- will we get to see that conversation? And more grandfatherly John? x
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
I'm definitely gonna try and do the conversation. As long as it cooperates, you'll definitely get to see that conversation! :) And there will definitely be more grandfatherly John in the future, I absolutely loved writing him with Connor, even if it was just a small scene.
Thanks so much for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiara] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appearance" from IceWhisper
Review:
Haha. And John falls under the thrall of baby Connor. No one can resist the spit bubbles. =D Loved!
Comments from author:
LOL! Yups! Cos Connor kicks ass like that! LOL! Now I just need to figure out wtf happens next....
Review By [IceWhisper] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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