very cool! looking forward to more!

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

Great story I love the way things are coming together. ;D I would love to know what happened in Sunnydale though and how the mayor was dealt with ;D

The younger version of Buffy is still in L.A., right? Is no one going to check on her? I mean, if all those potentials died, wouldn't Buffy be called since the Council never knew about her? Nice update by the way.

Uummm...I'm really enjoying this story, but this chapter leaves me puzzled.

Ok, rescuing the future Scoobie crew after the timeline gets corrupted is of the good. However, what is with bringing over the young Xander, willow and Jesse? Sure, the Harris parents are hardly with considering and the Rosenbergs repeatedly abandon their young daughter but they are still the young Xander's and Willow's legal guardians. Worse, as far as I know, Jesse and his parents have a real family relationship and he has just disappeared on them. So what is with bringing over the young teens without at least Jesse's parents and the Rosenbergs?

For that matter, what about the Summers family? Buffy is an unknown potential. Also, if Joyce gets treatment for her condition before it worsens over time she could be saved, especially allowing for magical healing.

So this chapter leaves me somewhat puzzled.

Love the story though! ;)

Nicely done. Well played. Timelines are such fragile and tricky things. *smirk*

It's been awhile since I read this, I thought I was tracking it. It's nice to discover it again.

Good "example of what they are facing" kind of chapter.

Again lots of interesting ideas - enough ideas that I keep reading - but still kind of outline-y.

I think there needs to be more exposition on what the accords are.

I do like that you are having non-wizarding world deamon lore taught through a roleplaying game to the kids. Perhaps you will reconnect the 2 worlds of Xander in time to fight the bringers?

An interesting and plausible set of problems, headed strategically. I notice that you do try to go into some emotional stuff by looking at the dreams and nightmares of Xander and Harry.

Please note that you wrote:
Their like a few of the others Kruft has brought in to serve him;

In this case, you mean they are like a few of the others, so that would be they're.

Seems like you are heading to a point where Xander as the head of Ravenclaw outside of the school may have to head to the school to claim some sort of right of information from the students.

Great story, I really like how well you melded the two worlds together, and the new badguy is great as well! Keep up the excellent work!

An interesting twist.