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The Princess and the Mercenary

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Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
I love the Eliot/Buffy pairing; they're perfect together!

And Xander went as Prince Humperdinck?! *chortles gleefully* Also perfect!!!
Comments from author:
Buffy and Eliot or Lindsey (if he's trying to be good) gives me all kinds of happy smiles. Couldn't help myself in putting Xander as the bad guy.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I LOVE the ending to this one. LOL I took a test on face book that said the 80's movie that best defines me is The Princess Bride the other day so I have been meaning to watch it again ever since. So it was a lot of fun to read this one.
Comments from author:
Who wouldn't love the ending of having Eliot stick around? Yum!
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
This was the cutest thing!

I really loved it.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Musie smacked me over the head with the idea.
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
I resisted reading... then gave in. LOVED IT! ~facepalms~ And yet, I cannot seem to find any other way to tell you that. Does it get repetitive, do you think? Anyhow, it was fabulous. I loved the faux pas for Xander. Idiot. Who doesn't know The Princess Bride? Honestly? Good movie choice and the ending was superb. Looking forward to whatever you post next.

CT.
Comments from author:
I feel so powerful and Borg-like. 'Resistance is futile.' Don't be too hard on Xander for not knowing the movie. After all, it is a chick-flick. Maybe the girls hadn't forced him into watching it yet.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from Rowaine
Review:
Buffy is definitely not my favorite character, but I love how you write her... much more human and less snotty than canon. Plus, Eliot - always a winner. Another lovely story!
Comments from author:
I'll certainly take it as a compliment that you liked Buffy the way I wrote her. And who can resist the yumminess that is Eliot?
Review By [Rowaine] • Date [1 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from Aeryn
Review:
I haven't seen Leverage but enjoyed this xover. Hope the Bunny bites with a bit more of this.
Comments from author:
Not sure it will happen, but who knows what the late night bunnies will do in my dreams.
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [1 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from (Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine
Review:
Very cute. I love it that Angel's knickers got into a twist over Elliot's flirting with our girl B. That was funny.
Comments from author:
And he was *this* close to sealing the deal with her! Now how will he lose his soul? Darn fanfic writers!
Review By [(Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine] • Date [1 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from RevDorothyL
Review:
"As you wish" -- perfect ending to this short and delightful fic. Perhaps you'll write a sequel someday?
Comments from author:
Wasn't gonna do it originally, but then I realized that I didn't have a single quote from the movie in the story, so I had to put in the line about the kiss and Westley's best-known line. We'll see if the late night bunnies talk Musie into a sequel or not.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, my first thought of the most romantic couple was "Morticia and Gomez Aaddams?"

This was a fun cross-over choice.. but could you at least give us an actor reference for "Eliot"? Leverage from what I've seen is so poorly written that I couldn't sit through an entire episode.

Okay did some research: This is the same actor who played Lindsey MacDonald semi-evil lawyer employee of wolf ram and hart. His first acting roles were when he was in his mid-20s.
Comments from author:
You got a point with the Addams couple. I can't believe you didn't like Leverage! Which episode did you try to watch? Eliot's character seems like such a great match for Buffy - what with the love of fighting and hating guns and stuff. Not to mention he's HOT! There's a fic by DemonChildeKyra called 'Opposite Images' that leaves me drooling. The idea of Lindsey and Eliot together (in a threesome way, not slash way)....mmmm.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from zigpal
Review:
Well, this was a fun one, and I'm glad for once I got to read it as a reader. Well done. Besides, Buffy did like her guys older, so a 20 year old Eliot is perfect.
Comments from author:
And this way, you get to review! LOL. Now all they have to do is keep their hands off each other until she's legal - or go to a state where 17 is old enough.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from spk
Review:
Such a cute story. I am a HUGE Christian Kane fan, so I LOVE the idea of Buffy paired with Eliot or Lindsey. :)
Comments from author:
That was kind of the whole point of this fic. I desperately wanted to pair her with Eliot, and somebody showed me the movie case. Next thing you know, there's a bunny born!
Review By [spk] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from danielbuffyfan
Review:
Oh I just loved that. You should do a follow up to when Angel moves to L.A. and ends up having to go up against Lindsay. It could be one of the reasons he ends up hating him.
Comments from author:
Ooo, even better is if Lindsey is Eliot's older brother or something! LOL.
Review By [danielbuffyfan] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from ncatt
Review:
This could change so many things over the next two seasons that it almost seems a pity not to continue. ;) Even if it does make a really neat one shot.
Comments from author:
Yeah, who could be the big bad for season 2 now? Draw out the Judge storyline longer? Wouldn't want to be Giles if he tried to do the Cruciamentum on Buffy this time - not with Eliot around.
Review By [ncatt] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from SassyFrass
Review:
That was really fun!
I'd love to see more.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Princess and the Mercenary" from AshDawnSoulmates
Review:
Lol LOOOVED it of course!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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