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Review of chapter "Old Faces" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Brilliant!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Old Faces" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Wonderful- i think Dawn and Joshua would be good friends- but I have a feeling that Buffy and Angel may follow...
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [21 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sometimes the strangest eyes see clearly" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
AWW- so cute...
Comments from author:
Thanks! I was really worried about pulling off Joshua but I was definitely going for sweet! :-D
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Defining Family" from TouchoftheWind
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Nice- Joshua is probably the first person that has ever acted like that around Connor...Dawn might have but Joshua would have been new to it too...skinny fella -giggles-...Lol! Maybe have Max's POV of Connior fighting...
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like the skinny fella! I figured big, small, and medium fella were already used. It will either be Max or Alec's perspective after Joshua but I'm still working on Joshua's, it's proving challenging to get into his head but I should have it up by tommorow!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [6 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Soldier, Survivor" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Great! I like how this is coming together...I would like to see more of what others think of Connor- especially Joshua...since its all been from Connor perspective...maybe have one of the new recruits start something with Connor because they think he's weak...and Connor kicks there arse...like how you mentionned that Connor respected them for keeping up their training but hos he had an edge...its very true Connor had to fight to survive every day in a much more literal sense than the transgenics...

I also need a hug between Connor and Joshua...PLEASE!
Comments from author:
Hug as requested! And yes I do want to write some other characters' perspectives of Connor so I'm planning a Joshua perspective chapter for the next part. Thanks for all your reviews and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Soldier, Survivor" from periskyye
Review:
I really like what I've read so far. Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy! :-)
Review By [periskyye] • Date [4 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Stained Memories" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very nice- poor Connor...and Joshua trying to help him was so cute...Joshua hugs Max a lot he should do tha same for Connor...or we should see Max's face when Connor makes a jump even she can't make...
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [4 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strangers in a Strange World" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Beautiful- the explanation of being freaks in a freak society was perfect! Also Max trying to sneak attack him...Lol! Maybe we could see Connor beat her...I think The Destroyer would be more powerful than transgenics...
Comments from author:
Thanks! I thought that both Joshua and Connor would understand being the wierd ones in a community of wierd ones. And yes I have to agree, he has a bit of an edge on them and we will see some of that in action I promise!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [3 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who I Am" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
VERY GOOD! Sweet and peaceful yet with a dash of angst...nice...
Comments from author:
Thank you! That's what I was going for :-) I don't normally write Connor so we'll see if I can keep it up.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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