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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from FemXanderForever
Review:
I really wish this was still going on. It actually looks like a cool thing to read, once it gets off the ground.
Review By [FemXanderForever] • Date [30 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Raider
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you have just made my week with this story.

seriously good and, sure to be funny.

more please.
Review By [Raider] • Date [15 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DarkFaerieYumi
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*excited giggles* SWEET! SWEET! SWEET! *bounces around* I'M in geek heaven! LOL This is so cool!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from darthridian
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nice addition, too bad jesse didn't join them in the training he could have been like krilin or yamcha :D

but then again xander could teach him later.

i would love to see teal'c using chi aswell and sam carter could be like bulma creating a gravity gym for them, the rest of sg-1 could benefit from the training aswell, and it would be funny when they next meet up with the snakes still claiming to be gods but then jack starts flying around teasing said snake head that for a so called god he could not fly. :D

smallville, chloe and pete would be prime for some training so they could keep up with clark, maybe jonathan aswell to be able to relate more to his son and sympathise with his situation.

hope to see more good writing soon.

keep up the good worl.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [31 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Romance there may be, but sex should be implied at most. Vincent Price it, sometimes suspense and imagination work better than explicit depiction.

As far as the tale, if you do Smallville, early stages of the DCU would suit as well, while Supernatural would imply things like the X-Files and Highlander.

Buffy and Company? Cameo appearances and issues with the Dragonballs, at a guess...
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [31 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from LFW
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Great addition and honestly not a reader of slash. As for suggestions, Howard the Duck to help protect Cleveland. Dirty Harry to help the Charmed ladies in San Fran or Nash Bridges. I think cops in the know is very helpful even if they are not heavy hitters. But as you will. Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bluesnowman
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good stuff.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Morrigan
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Jesse is back! *___* I always thought those two (Xander and Jesse) had the beginnings of a relationship so this could be a new start *winkwink*
People from other series, mmm... from Stargate I love all the geeks, specially Rodney (and McShep!), but good fighters would be Ronon and Teal'c. The other could be also from the comic book world?

As you can see, I support any slash pairing you want to write ^^
Review By [Morrigan] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Rob
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Interesting. But you probably should limit your crosses. Multi-crosses seems to mutate badly. :)

Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
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I hope there is more and Xander is not green and I agree he is better than Vegetta. Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [4 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sunamee
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Interesting start. I look forward to the next update.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [6 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darthridian
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interesting start, has a lot of promise the fact he didn't go as a saiyan is different and possibly good, with regeneration and other abilities he will keep it has a lot of potential.

nice writing and hope to see more soon.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [3 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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