Pretty horrible start with all the whiny bashing; hopefully it will improve. Maybe you can write a side story with the Scoobies prospering without a necrophiliac slayer that constantly runs directly into traps. On the other hand, good luck with this story because I have lost all desire to read it because of the intro.
Comments from author:
It's clear you have a very definitive view about characters. If so read please read the warnings at the start of my stories as I did point out in the beginning that this fic was not for Scooby lovers!
Review of chapter "Hope and Wedding Gifts" from Selonianth
Review:
I can't say I'm of the good about messing with Arwen and Aragorn. Can't say it at all. It is a good story though, So I'll give you the benefit of the doubt for now.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you're giving it the benefit if the doubt. I hope it will work and think that it can be brilliant. Read the new chapter posted and see if that helps make your mind up :)
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hope and Wedding Gifts" from AndreaMaine
Review:
Now for the Horror and Glory of the Battle of Helm's Deep!
Comments from author:
It is now up. Hope you like :)
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Calm before the storm" from lilacsandroses
Review:
Hello,
Will there be more Scoobies's views on the Slayers' leaving? I'm just curious about what their reaction would be after Whistler leaves. Will they explain their action or will they go on about Buffy abandoning them. What about the reaction of Dawn? I wonder what happens to her even though she deserves it after she choosing them over family.
Thanks for the updates.
Comments from author:
Hmm when I get time I might write a flipside fic exploring the effects of them leaving. I can't say it will be quick as my teaching term starts Tuesday and any potential writing time disappears.
And you're welcome there is a new chapter up so enjoy!
Review By [lilacsandroses] • Date [30 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Calm before the storm" from AndreaMaine
Review:
I love the whole story so far. I really loved the subtle and not so subtle humor in Chapter 6 and I think that chapter 7 showed just how well Buffy fits into the world of Middle Earth despite her late 20th early 21st Century Earth background.
Comments from author:
I reckon it is her love of medieval weapons and the humour will stay as it is mine. She really would manage well I think - I'm pleased that you're enjoying the story. And a new chapter is now up! :)
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [30 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Thank you! :) You will be glad to know new chap is up!
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [28 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Say what? Bond?" from JennRosbury
Review:
Love it and am looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
So glad you are still enjoying the story. New chapter is now posted :)
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [28 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Worms and disappointment" from ConstanceTruggle
Review:
hellbells!!!!!!!! WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED???? Do you know how long I've been waiting? DO YOU??? I NEEEEEEED MORE! It's irreverent and delightful. Needs a bit of editing, but most stories do, so whatever. UPDATE! Please?
CT.
Comments from author:
In truth as a writer i've grown a lot. This was the third story I ever wrote so I will edit it and begin again in approx two weeks when my teacher training finishes.
Edit: So the first four chaps are now edited and two new chapters for your reading delight!