Like the chapter overall, but the resolution of the conflict still seemed a bit too easy for Buffy and her 'deus ex machina' weapons, unless it was a mostly crack-fic result.
(yeah, I know you mostly write crack/humor stories, but some details within crack-fic fighting/victories that border on being dramatic can be fun to read, too.) :)
Comments from author:
It's a fair comment. I'm trying to branch out and write different type of stories but I hate leaving stories unresolved.
Review By [Kremer] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finding the lost!" from alynambered
Review:
It's great to see this continuing - now I need to reread to refresh my memory.
Comments from author:
*Smiles* I'm glad that real life has calmed to the point where I can start writing again.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding the lost!" from jjordan
Review:
Very good! I can picture Daniel's reaction to seeing a pregnant Faith. I hope you can update soon.
Comments from author:
It should be a blast, I just have to get the write tone.
Having given birth a few times, I do hope you plan to put Buffy in the room so Faith can squeeze her hand. To this day, my husband only gives me one or two fingers if I'm in pain and need to 'get a grip', so to speak. Lesson hard -- and well! -- learned. But Faith would break Daniel's hand, fingers, whatever she gets a hold of... and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. ^.^
CT.
Comments from author:
She probably will break his hand unless Willow can come up with a strengthening spell.
ConstanceTruggle
