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Review of chapter "The High Priestess" from MarcusSLazarus
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I'm still more interested in seeing an update on the 'Transformers' front, but this looks like it could be interesting too; whether it's the possibility of the Winchesters assuming that Tara's Lenore, or just how the Scoobies will react to meeting an actual angel, there are no foreseeable circumstances where the two groups meeting right now could be boring...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The High Priestess" from LeaFairy
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I'm very much intrigued by this! The whole concept with Castiel wanting to find the Key to help find God is just freaking brilliant, and I can't wait to see his (along with everyone else's) reactions to finding out the Key is now human.. well human-ish :-) I also love you for adding Missouri to this. She's such a wonderful character that's hardly ever used in stories, especially in fics set after the early seasons... So Yay for some awesome Missouri! (lol)

Also, besides the kick-ass concept and having the amazing Missouri, I really like your Dawn. She's pretty well written and I think you're doing a good job on showing her grief over losing her mother and Buffy, along with her dealing with being a not completely human key thing-y =)

I am curious if you're going to have Buffy being brought back though? I kinda don't want her to... Mostly because it will detract from Dawn and her story and also because it will massive complications with Castiel and his wanting Dawn's help...

Anyhoo, I really look forward to hopefully, reading more! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The High Priestess" from willowbee
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Good start. I do hope you chose to update sometime soon.
Review By [willowbee] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The High Priestess" from CousinMary
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Just found this story and I really like it. I'm curious what you're going to do with Buffy, if anything, because I have to say, the way you're writing Dean and his guilt over being in Hell would mesh well with Buffy's straight out of Heaven angst. Not to mention giving his something to focus on while Cas and Dawn grow closer. Even without Buffy, I'm excited to see Cas and Dawn interact. One small correction, Sunnydale is in southern California (near LA)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [17 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The High Priestess" from AllenPitt
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Boy are Castiel and the Winchesters in for a surprise. They've never seen anything like Sunnydale. Meanwhile Tara might surprise them a bit, looking just like that vampire-ess they met earlier (Amber Benson's character). that could be fun. At least Willow is in her way very powerful stage now, so Castiel won't have an easy time of it. Nobody will be happy to see them show up looking for the Key.
Hey-- there's a huge group of dead Knights of B. near Sunnydale. Ghostly army, maybe?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The High Priestess" from DarkestSlayer
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Northern California? Are we going with Real World geography? Cause in Buffyverse Sunnydale is about 2 hour outside LA, it's also said that it's pretty close to Santa Barbara.
Comments from author:
o_O; I forgot about that...I just remember in one episode that they said it was in Northern Cali.
Review By [DarkestSlayer] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The High Priestess" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Glad to see that the boys are getting somewhere!

Good update :)

And gotta hand it to those monks - they sure understand the concept of perseverence! ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The High Priestess" from Kirallie
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Interesting work.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [11 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Monastery" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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This is a VERY interesting story and I hope you continue!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mysticism" from SmithAndWesson
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Not really into Supernatural fics but this one seems decent so far. One nit:

“The next card is... Death reversed. It can mean a birth, or it can mean not excepting something that's gone... I think it's tell you that you need to move on from your Mom's death.”

In this case it would be "accepting" and not "excepting".
Review By [SmithAndWesson] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monastery" from betrayal
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Hey, am glad that you updated, I can't wait for the next chapter. How are they going to get out of the Monastery? Please update soon! ANd keep up te great work!
Review By [betrayal] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mysticism" from Ramenth
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I normally hate supernatural fics, but this is quite interesting so far. I look forward to seeing where it'll go.

A word to the wise though, you have the Aqua lyrics wrong. :P
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [24 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mysticism" from Lize
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Love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Review By [Lize] • Date [24 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mysticism" from betrayal
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Hey, I found your story earlier today. I think your doing a great job so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the gread job.
Review By [betrayal] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mysticism" from AllenPitt
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Getting Sam & Dean into the same room with Dawn let alone any other scoobies. Combustible mix. Boy am I hoping Anya is there, too. She's seen it all....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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