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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cdog
Review:
Shame that this wouldn't really happen on the show. I mean I like the characters as individuals, but the Chloe/Matt thing just came out of left field and left Eli holding the bags.
Comments from author:
Yeah, at this point my main hope is that it doesn't become one of those drawn out far beyond necessity love triangles. I'd like to see a resolution even if Eli doesn't get the girl. Even something as simple as Chloe getting a clue and simply telling him she's not interested (or that she is for that matter).
Review By [Cdog] • Date [8 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Valkyrie
Review:
Huh. So I'm not the only one cheering Eli on. I think he needs someone a bit better than Chloe though. She seems a bit too shallow.
Comments from author:
Nope, Eli is the man, he is... Math Boy!

To be honest, I actually like Chloe and through to 'Light' I was cheering for her and Eli. Although, I am liking her less as the episodes go on there is still another sorta Eli/Chloe fic I'm thinking of writing after seeing 'Earth'. A missing scene type of story with Eli taking the passed out Chloe home and having a chat with her mom (who seemed more likable in this episode) and her ending up deciding Eli would be a nice boy for her daughter. I'm also thinking of writing an Eli/Vanessa James story, mainly because the idea of those two together amuses me for some reason.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [9 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Go Eli!

Great fun, thanks.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [9 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FariaLyton
Review:
I think I've already said that I haven't seen anything by MidknightJ that I didn't like, and I really don't like Lt. Scott (why can't they just NOT carry him back next time?), and Eli is my favorite character of SGU by far (poor guy gets whumped in canon), so I'm trying to decide if two thumbs up is enough, or if I should try and 'borrow' a few extra thumbs.
Comments from author:
Thanks, that's quite the compliment. Hopefully you'll enjoy what I put out in the future (with what little writing time I have these days) as well. I have about four or five one-shots half to three quarters written, as well as half written chapters for my multi-part fics to finish up (hopefully) in the near future.

This idea mainly came from re-watching the episodes, through 'Water' since I started this before 'Earth' aired. I want to like Matt, and usually do, but I just think the character needs to grow up a bit. Especially in regards to relationships. Having sex with Lt. James at the base, then 'subtly' putting her on his search team and then sleeping with Chloe on the Destiny like two days later, three max? Just wrong. I will applaud the writers though. They had Vanessa find out without the usual over-dramatic angst (so far at least) and I think she handled it fairly maturely when she walked in on them.

And Eli is my favourite character too. I identify with him the most out all the characters.

Thanks again.
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [9 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Whoooh!!!!.
Go Eli, Go Eli goo!!!.
Cool fic, see ya!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [9 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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