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Xander Harris and the Matchmaker of Doom

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Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Harry Potter (Harry/Hermione)" from silvergaurd
Review:
great new chapters. Hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. There's a couple ideas for pairing I have in mind for this story. I don't do slash pairings unless it's girl on girl slash. And I don't slash a character that is very hetrosexual in the cannon. So there'll be no "I've just discovered my homosexuality" versions of a hetrosexual character from me. Characters like Faith, Felicia Hardy, and Chianna are fair game. They are bisexual as I see them.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [15 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Harry Potter (Harry/Hermione)" from kayron
Review:
I liked the Harry and Hermoine story. I always thought that Ron and Hermoine fought too much, and that Ron was just using her for her brains.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And I love the Harmione ship!

And that allways did brother me. "Hermione, why did you pick Ron Weasley. He's so not for you. Harry's a better fit for you. Ron's just using you for your brains." then I saw the movies and saw that Emma Watson's hot! then I realised that even if the book Ron was just using her for her brains, the movie Ron was also using her for her body, too.
Review By [kayron] • Date [4 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Harry Potter (Harry/Hermione)" from EmruasCat
Review:
Not bad. Just to let you know, I did some editing in this chapter - strictly grammar stuff. I did add a part to the disclaimer: the idea for this story is mine. Your chapter is short and to-the-point, which is not a bad thing, but you might want to consider adding a few things to it. For instance, why would Harry refer to himself as the Boy-Who-Lived to a complete stranger in a train station? Why did he start talking to Xander in the first place? Where is the train station? "She's my girl now" is not a phrase generally used in England; perhaps you could find another way to phrase it. You have a good start to this chapter, but now I kinda want to continue it myself just to answer all those questions I have. Would you object to this? I did not mess with the plot in this chapter because the work belongs to you, so I will not continue this particular plotline without your permission. Thanks for adding to the story; I was getting bored thinking of my own pairings >
Comments from author:
Go ahead, EmruasCat my friend.
Review By [EmruasCat] • Date [3 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Harry Potter (Harry/Hermione)" from ReflectionsOfReality
Review:
It would be better if it ended up as a threesome like,
"He's my boy as well now..."

Just a dynamic that is not seen often.
~Reflections
Comments from author:
I did do that. Thanks for the idea!
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [3 Feb 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: NCIS (Gibbs/DiNozzo)" from silvergaurd
Review:
great fic, hope to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: NCIS (Gibbs/DiNozzo)" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I like the idea of Yenta!Xan. I also liked the Gibbs/DiNozzo match. I went awwwwww.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: NCIS (Gibbs/DiNozzo)" from katfairy
Review:
Oh, I'm liking this.

My only quibble, and it's a very minor one, is that I hope they won't all be slash. Not that I object to plausible (or properly implausible) slash, but if all the couples end up being slash, it would seem a bit contrived.

Now I'm going back to my happy place with naked Walter Skinner. That guy was amazingly buff under those suits...
Comments from author:
In reference to naked Walter Skinner, I must admit that he does make a very nice happy place. However, I rather prefer Riddick from "Pitch Black" and "Chronicles of Riddick." Talk about eye candy...
Review By [katfairy] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: NCIS (Gibbs/DiNozzo)" from kizunakat
Review:
These are totally awesome. I can't wait for more. Please write more!!!!!!!kizuna
Review By [kizunakat] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The explanation" from VessaMorana
Review:
Oh no! Xander's enjoying playing matchmaker, the world is doomed!

I love the interaction between Xander and Gibbs, so great.
Review By [VessaMorana] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: NCIS (Gibbs/DiNozzo)" from MissE
Review:
Cute :D Very cute.
Review By [MissE] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: X-Files (Skinner/Mulder)" from Caliadragon
Review:
*Giggles* I am so going to enjoy this! I can't wait to see who you come up with next.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The explanation" from MadylanCross
Review:
Love it so far, can't wait for more.
Review By [MadylanCross] • Date [18 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The explanation" from IAMZIPPY
Review:
great start cant wait for more
Review By [IAMZIPPY] • Date [10 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The explanation" from kyzhart
Review:
Catchy start. Can't wait to see the shenanigans.
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [9 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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