Please do a sequel.

Great start. I really hope you continue.

I really like it and hope that you don't stop there.

Wow! This looks to be an interesting story and universe.

Thanks
Calia

Okay... so I might have to hurt you if you just leave it there. Good start and interesting twist... but I'll have to stalk you if you don't continue.

:)

Major props for atmosphere and tight writing. The concept doesn't leak from first read and flows well with what we are given. Would really like to see if you could add to this. Not sure if you are willing, but at least from this you feel like you have a good grip on the personalities and the aura/feeling of the show. That mix of unease and foreboding.

Man, there isn't much to critique from my viewpoint as again it looks pretty well self contained. Just have to say that it is great in the writing as well as the originality of the thought.

Many props and here again is hoping the idea of it festers and its plot bunnies stay restless. Later.

A well written mindjob.

Excellent, and very Fringe-worthy, start. I hope there will be more.