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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Kremer
Review:
A rather short, but active, chapter. Mainly further detailing the plight they're in.

More is coming soon, I hope? :)
Review By [Kremer] • Date [20 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from banner
Review:
Considering I've never heard of this crossover, you can take my word for it that you've made it extremely readable and easy to understand.
I just found this story, and I've had a wonderful time with it so far.
Review By [banner] • Date [7 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Like it so far, keep up the excellent work.


Typo I spotted. Typo in brackets.

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The pair headed downtown and pulled up in front of a beauty salon called simply 'Pat's'. [Therte] were lights on in the back so Garth rang the bell and waited. A few moments later two young women unlocked the door and opened it, "Xander sent us."


There
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [6 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Mediancat
Review:
I always appreciate a writer pulling out an obscure crossover character; doing it well enough that it sounds like it could have come from Chesbro himself, that's another level of excellent entirely.

Good story and I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
Comments from author:
I can copy pretty much any style in short bursts. Stephen King is the hardest for me because of his insane wordiness. I just can't keep up the text-spew like he can.
Review By [Mediancat] • Date [6 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Oh the suspense!

It's a pity this fic isn't getting all the attention it deserves. You're doing a really good job of writing here.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
I don't beg for views or reviews. I'm just happy people are enjoying my stuff.
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
If some idiot managed to go all Donner party before the circus came along, they could be facing Wendigo.
Comments from author:
Interesting thought. Might even be correct...
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
A couple of good chapters there, hope you put up number 7 soon.

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Thanks again for the compliment Dave!

Due to the fact that I have a few stories that need finishing. I decided to sporadically add chapters to them in rotation, until one truly clicked like my Dru in Gotham one.
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Please to update now!
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [3 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Tjack
Review:
I love the series but there's one small bone to (playfully) pick.
Faith like Eliza D. & myself are all Boston born....BLEEP the Freakin' Mets and Yankees!! RED SOX Nation!!!
Comments from author:
Oh yeah I know that, but given that Mongo's a New Yorker would any Bostonian expect them to follow the Sox? I'm from Baltimore and I would support the Mets over the Yankees. I mean the Mets are NL so they just don't count.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [17 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from zafaran
Review:
More, more, more, please. And I've got to go read the original stories. Thanks for the introduction. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
Thanks for the support. The books are an acquired taste, but I enjoy them.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [17 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from slmncpm
Review:
*laughs and hands you the kitchen sink* may as well put that in there too. *winks*
Comments from author:
Ah, you think I'm kidding. Mongo's world is as bizarre in its own special way as the Slayer's
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [17 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Although I've never read any of the xover books or comics or enen seen the film. I'm quite enjoying this and I'm putting it on track...please keep writing.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
Peter Dinklage (star of The Station Agent) optioned 'An Affair of Sorcerers' (3rd book in the 10+ book series), but it hasn't started filming. The first book (The Shadow of a Broken Man) was released in '77. The last one (Dreaming of a Fallen Eagle) came out in '96.

All sorts of Mongo stuff can be found at http://www.dangerousdwarf.com

By the way, a compliment from you Dave, is a pretty big honor. Thanks.
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [17 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from slmncpm
Review:
omg this is fantastic!! *hugs you* hurry????
Comments from author:
I am a horrible procrastinator, but for you I'll try.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
I'm enjoying the story but this chapter was a little heavy on the exposition and I felt my eyes glazing over a bit.
Comments from author:
Yeah, sometimes you have to lay the pipe.
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Tjack
Review:
Do you think the existence of vampires & the the Watchers Council rate a "Valhalla Priority"?
Also, Veil Kendry might be a perfect match for Faith.
Comments from author:
Veil and Chant will be appearing.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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