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Review of chapter "Rampant Misunderstandings" from Keshkreature
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I love this fic, and I hope you'll update it again soon, as it's coming up on a year since the last update. I think a girl would be a nice addition to the Slayer line. And surely with such great minds thinking on the situation, River and Jayne can start running together on a slightly more cohesive train of thought? :)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [4 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rampant Misunderstandings" from Gideon
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Cool story. I hope the girls can think of some way to help River and Jayne understand each other better. I thought they had for a while but then they stopped trying to understand and slipped back into their old patterns.
I hope the baby will bring them together, not keep them apart. Has Jayne given River her ultrasounds yet?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Dec 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rampant Misunderstandings" from ptbptb
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Very nice plot - it really grabs your attention. And a nasty twist at the (current) end.

I hope you have something equally interesting for the slayer's foes. It doesn't seem that demons are likely to be it - and 'the Alliance' (as a whole) doesn't seem that likely either.

Either way I look forward to seeing more (fingers crossed) soon.
Review By [ptbptb] • Date [12 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rampant Misunderstandings" from LadyParadox
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Awesome crossover. Really good characterizations and dialog. Keep going please.
Review By [LadyParadox] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rampant Misunderstandings" from LeaFairy
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*sigh* River and Jayne are a bunch of stupid poopheads! lol. Loved the chapter darlin, hate that River and Jayne are constantly misunderstanding each other though... I hope they will eventually figure each other out. I can't stand seeing River so upset, same with Jayne too. I absolutely love that Kaylee, Inara and Sara are going to try to help them though... Bring on the matchmakers! I can't wait! *grins*

Wonderfully done chapter like always... I look forward to reading more! Thanks for updating!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rampant Misunderstandings" from Ansku
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Good chapter :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rampant Misunderstandings" from RevDorothyL
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So glad to see another chapter of this! Though I'm very sorry that Jayne and River continue to miscommunicate and misunderstand one another so spectacularly . . . especially now that Sara has explained the particular danger for Slayers who don't know how to choose to love.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trade Agreements" from LeaFairy
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Absolutely fantastic chapter darlin! I'm continuing loving Angel and Spike and even Sara's interactions with River... I love how they're there for her and are so understanding of who she is and what she's going through, unlike the Serenity crew. I also liked the scene with Angel, Spike and River and her 'sensing' their demons and how she saw Angelus behind his 'cage', it was equal parts awesome and scary. *shivers* Very interesting how even Spike's demon has some 'humanity' and Angelus' completely lacks it.

I also wonder what's up with River's slayer-dream with Faith? What did it mean? Was it just about her trusting her instincts or something more? Also, will 'Faith' be 'back'?

Jayne's reactions to River and the baby that's possibly his is understandable and very in-character. Great job! But I do hope he stops being such a jerk soon, at least for River sake. I hate seeing her all sad. *hugs*

And as for the baby, I think it should be a girl for tradition sake, like Dawn, or maybe even twins if you wanted to go there. And as for a name, well I really got no idea. *shrugs* Sorry.

Anywho, this was another enjoyable chapter... Thanks for updating! I look forward to reading more!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trade Agreements" from kittenpoker
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baby girl! that would be hilarious- the entire crew would be mama bear if anyone ever tried to date that girl :)
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [3 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trade Agreements" from Ansku
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Good chapter :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trade Agreements" from littleoldme
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I'm really enjoying this. As for the baby, I'm hoping for a girl. In either case, I think River would pick a name that had a meaning that was obvious to her, but not to necessarily to anyone else.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trade Agreements" from debs
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How about Charity for the baby? River has had a vision of Faith and now Spike and Angel are sending Serenity on good will missions.
Review By [debs] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trade Agreements" from RevDorothyL
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I'm sure River will love the baby, whichever 'it' turns out to be, but for the sake of 'tradition' I like the idea of a baby girl as the new Key. Plus, I like the idea of Jayne learning to be papa to a little girl.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trade Agreements" from Keshkreature
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I love it! I hope Jayne gets some sense knocked into him soon.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [1 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trade Agreements" from Carojen
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Good chapter. For the baby, how about Jordan? It's a biblical name just like Simon, gender ambigious like Jayne, and of course there is the river Jordan.
Review By [Carojen] • Date [1 Jan 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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