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Review of chapter "Prologue, Chapter 1 & 2" from lorwen
Review:
great start!
hope there's more :D
Review By [lorwen] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Chapter 1 & 2" from micedden
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is they going to more soon
Review By [micedden] • Date [27 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Chapter 1 & 2" from spikeismine
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Ooooo, I like it. I can't wait to see what is up with Xander, this could get interesting. Please update soon.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Chapter 1 & 2" from kayron
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I've seen all three Underworld movies, so I am familiar with the story. I remember that doctor. He freaked me out more than anything else in the movie. He seemed to ENJOY his little experiments. A LOT! His patients, better described as victims, not so much. I'm definitely worried about Xander. Xander's reactions seem a bit more extreme than those of Micheal Corvin. Michael didn't show any sign of lycan heritage. He wasn't 'feeling the animal'. He didn't show signs of being a lycan until Lucian bit him in the elevator. Michael had the DNA through his Corvin bloodline, but showed no signs. Except that he hasn't changed, Xander shows signs of being a lycan. Why is that? Very interesting so far. I'll be reading.
Review By [kayron] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Chapter 1 & 2" from mithrilandtj
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Curious to find out more.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Chapter 1 & 2" from Jaylynn
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It might be distracting you from Nano but its a pleasure to read either way. I haven't really read much with Underworld but I hope you continue this as I'm enjoying just the first few chapters. For the movie verse are you in the first movie or on to the second? *has only watched the first but now wants to watch that one over and then the other one.*

(just read the reviews)
I think they are getting slash vibes with the whole Oz thing but I see where it could go that way but I also thought of a Alpha Beta relationship thing where Xander is thinking of the only other member of the gang that is a type of werewolf, even if its not the same type as part of his werewolf pack and him as Alpha. *shrugs* I don't mind slash or het so I don't mind either way but I know some get turned away by slash. Its' your story so do what you want, (might want to put warning if you do decide of slash so you don't get yelled at though)and I know I'll read no matter which direction you take it, even if there is no pairing at all, since I just like the concept.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Chapter 1 & 2" from Morgomir
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Interesting. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Chapter 1 & 2" from michaelangelo
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Cool story so far, I take it that Xander is a Corvinus descendant? I also have to agree with Darksnider that the story has a heavy slash feel starting with Xander's attraction to Oz. I'd suggest putting [NOT SLASH] in the summary just to let people know as I nearly stopped reading because of it. Keep up the good work.

I agree you need a beta, some words though spelled correctly were wrong. Such as, for example 'wreck havoc' instead of 'wreak havoc', or 'big needed' instead of 'big needle'.


PS: If you're unsure if it's going to be slash or not, please just mark it slash anyway. Nothing pisses me off more than getting into a good story then for it to suddenly ambush with slash.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Chapter 1 & 2" from (Past Donor)PzkwVIb
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Good start: BTW you wrote "... it was not susceptible to the untrained eye ..." I think you mean perceptible and not susceptible.
Review By [(Past Donor)PzkwVIb] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Chapter 1 & 2" from Darksnider
Review:
Getting some slash vibes from this... mark it if that's what your going to write about, but if not don't care but seriously mark it if so.
Comments from author:
There are no slash vibes. I haven't even thought any slash yet, that's why I didn't mark it. I'm not sure there even will be so I guess I'll take that little warning out. I see where you may suspect that there are slashy vibes but they really aren't. Lucian needs Xander for something else entirely, hint: it has something to do with his blood.
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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