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Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 4" from fourmenandanelephant
Review:
I've enjoyed this story the whole clan thing is great by the way it works... It would be great if they go back to the SGC and Jack, Daniel and Hammond say something along the lines of "Hey nice tattoos..." Because honestly all three of them make great examples for fathers/grandfathers for members of the Buffy crew a lot better than any of the canon fathers and Giles by a long shot. Basically Giles and Wesley would have been shot dead by any of them and the old council destroyed for some of the things they did to Faith and Buffy in season 3 alone...
Review By [fourmenandanelephant] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from goldenruhl
Review:
this has been a fun story could you please finish it? pretty plz
Review By [goldenruhl] • Date [15 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from ChefJackButler
Review:
This was well done. Hopefully you'll continue it eventually.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from phoenixrampant
Review:
i'm enjoying this story. especially the references to classic science fiction.
Review By [phoenixrampant] • Date [6 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
I really love this story and I truly hope you can update soon.

Thank you for writing it.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from fanrei
Review:
thank you for the update.
Review By [fanrei] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from Rhyssia
Review:
You are now my favorite person for the inclusion of the red-headed twins. And Miranda.

Anyway!!
Comments from author:
Really? Thanks :-)

FYI: They are in an earlier story in this series - 'Jenny's New Groove' ( chronologically earlier in the story timeline anyway) though that is s lightly unfinished. And they get a story of their own ( their own 'Origin Story' so to speak) if I ever get to it.

( They also will eventually appear in my ( unrelated ) story "The Devil's Girl" though not as slayers, just ordinary Priestlys. Sort of.)

( And, if you haven't noticed, they also appear in two of Katrina's fic here - and all of her Mirandy fics posted elsewhere, of course.)
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
great fic so far! Can't wait to see where it goes.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
I always love your stories and this is one of my favorites. I love your humorous but still almost realistic story because it is as logical as it is funny. And, while out there, your characters are still close enough to canon I don't have to totally suspend my belief in "this could really happen". I just hope your next update is quicker than the last.

This update also gives me hope maybe some of your other stories will be updated someday. Hint, hint! Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from Spica
Review:
Nice to see that the story continued. ^_^
Review By [Spica] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from tealruby
Review:
Wonderful to see this story continuing! It made for a very welcome surprise, and looking forward to more. Cool to see it linking to the KP storyline too.
Comments from author:
Thanks :-)

The KP storyline is set in the same AU/crossover universe as this one so there will occasionally be bleed through, though appearances by KP herself will be very rare. After all, Global Justice is Disney's non-Marvel version of Shield and sometimes you need a globe-spanning organization to get things done.
Review By [tealruby] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There's a Portal for That" from burmafrdnow
Review:
have to do the old eye roll about most slayers being gay.

But then I notice that slash fanatics have a need to do things that way.

They never seem to be able to control themselves.

Good story anyway.
Comments from author:
Hadn't planned on making most of the slayers gay in this story but thanks for the idea.

( percentage wise the number of gay slayers in this story matches the general population (5-10% depending on which survey/study you believe). The majority might possibly be a tad sexually ambiguous, like Faith. But that's not really relevant for this story. )

Note: This really isn't one of those 'Everyone woke up gay' stories. At least not like over in 'Avenger fic-Land' over on AO3 where 95% of the fics are slash (as opposed to femslash like this story.) :-).
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I really liked this story.

Thanks for returning to it!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from alynambered
Review:
I read this many (2 or 3) years ago and, as it aged, put it in my hiatus story file. I am quite pleased to find it back in 'production', as it were. The sister interactions and the other character voices continue to keep the story moving along and it's as enjoyable as ever. Thank you!
Review By [alynambered] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
While i have a hard time imagining these couples coming into being, you're doing a nice job on the follow through.
Comments from author:
Well, it IS a crossover and fan fiction. Around here we're required to write 2 impossible pairings before lunch. Every day.

:-)

It also helps to be an old Sam/Janet shipper. Sort of.

And the whole 'Woke Up in Vegas Married' meme assumes very unlikely pairings as a major plot point. Having both Buffy and Dawn 'suffer' that fate is where we trod very close to the edges of 'not gonna work'.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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